There's an issue with having a computer that is highly unreliable. You end up having to type your stories up on your smart phone. With the little shitty keyboard.
And no tab key.
Still, I somehow managed to get this done. PLEASE BE AWARE THAT THE CRITIQUE LIGHT HAS BEEN TURNED ON. CRITIQUE THIS BITCH.
Glenn's life after the PCA has been miserable. He took the first job he could get, simply so he didn't have to stay at home all day and have to deal with his father (first introduced here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4238046/ ). It's not a pleasant existence, to say the least.
One night, his boss takes him aside. His brother, Axel, has come to take him clubbing. The Combat League vet isn't taking no for an answer, either. Worse still, is that the elder 'yena is hiding something. Glenn can already tell that he isn't going to have a good time.
...or is he?
That's two post-PCA stories down. One more...
And no tab key.
Still, I somehow managed to get this done. PLEASE BE AWARE THAT THE CRITIQUE LIGHT HAS BEEN TURNED ON. CRITIQUE THIS BITCH.
Glenn's life after the PCA has been miserable. He took the first job he could get, simply so he didn't have to stay at home all day and have to deal with his father (first introduced here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4238046/ ). It's not a pleasant existence, to say the least.
One night, his boss takes him aside. His brother, Axel, has come to take him clubbing. The Combat League vet isn't taking no for an answer, either. Worse still, is that the elder 'yena is hiding something. Glenn can already tell that he isn't going to have a good time.
...or is he?
That's two post-PCA stories down. One more...
Category Story / Pokemon
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 14 kB
Listed in Folders
Hmmm.. .a little fast pased but that was the nature of the beast here and it was in a good way, a little emotional roller coaster ride up and down to a satisfying conclusion that I cared about =3 Lovely work~
... sorry <,<; critique isn't my strong suit, I liked your story alot but that's the best I could manage T^T
... sorry <,<; critique isn't my strong suit, I liked your story alot but that's the best I could manage T^T
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