Arrow to the knee... I see what you did there!

Nice story, I take it this takes place around the time of the Zandalari rise on Cataclysm? the overall introduction of the characters is well done, even if one is not familiar with warcraft lore they would understand some of the concepts used in the story.

Yes! Thank you! :) That's what I was going for. It is indeed around the time of the rise of the Zandalari.

Concerning your comment on the second episode, I know how you feel about it. It's actually been waiting for proofreading for some time. >.< I wondered if it was too early to pull it up, but I felt I should at least deliver what people were waiting for with it. Don't worry, though! I'm planning on fixing it.

Is there anything I could do to improve on it? Any context that should be given from Warcraft Lore? Anything inconsistent from the first episode?

Well, oddly enough and its probably just me, I always think when working on 'fanfics' (or stories that use the setting-lore of another work be it a movie, game, etc.), the least extensive detailing or info about that world's lore you put in the story, the better. Mind you, may seem like contrary to what I said on my first coment and that is because you got it just right in the first chapter, while on the 2nd chapter it feels like you were looking to add some much info in a tight space of the chapter, and that often either leads to confusing the reader or simply overwhelming him with information.

Also, flow with the words, dont be afraid to extend a scene with things that may first seem pointless, they are only pointless if you dont add 'flavor' to them, thus you play with them around. A good example of this is how you detailed Tiriana's hardship at learning how to walk or even stand up in pawpads-digitrades, at first sight it may seem like a pointless scene but the way you described it and showed her frustration made it very interesting.

Of course, I am no pro writter, not one bit. But hey... my 2 cents :p