Now this is more like it, I think. I reread and rewrote the first chapter of my OC and fursona's story and I'm quite pleased with it. I'm sure there's more I can work on, but this took me a long time to get done. As I did with the last rewrite, I'm leaving the pervious version of the chapter up so you can compare.
Anyway, enjoy and please comment.
Anyway, enjoy and please comment.
Category Story / All
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File Size 46 kB
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