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I have the best dreams, I swear. XD
Is there already an anime like this? There probably is...
If there is, tell me what it's called, I want to see it. XD
Is there already an anime like this? There probably is...
If there is, tell me what it's called, I want to see it. XD
Category Story / All
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Size 120 x 120px
File Size 4 kB
Fudgin badonga's! That's pretty freakin' sweet! Sounds like an anime fruit punch of niceness right there. You should call it something simple and sort of deep... like "Bad Dream" or "Lucid". It would be nice, though, if bitch girl and sweet lass would have some interaction at some point. It's kinda weird waking up from a dream where you see somebody you hate about to kill somebody you both love and decide to save her without even feeling a TEENSY WEENSY bit of compassion for her.
Also a sort of idea for the moment of defeat thing would prolly go like:
(stops car in front of the party place, turning off the engine and both silent and awkwardly stiff in the car)
Bitch girl: "Well... we're here. I guess you should get the hell outta my car or something...?"
(pause)
Sweet lass: "Ummmm... right."
(Sweet lass gets out of the car proceeds to party. Suddenly stops, turns around and looks through the open car window to Bitch girl)
SL: "Hey... *insert BG's name here*..."
BG: *annoyed* "What?"
SL: "I just wanted to say... thanks... Any way I can make it up to you."
BG: "Psh! As if an ugly, poor girl like you can grant me anything."
(Long pause again and Sweet lass puts on a sad face, proceeds to the party again. Suddenly Bitch girl calls to her at the last second through the window.)
BG: " HEY YOU!"
SL: "Eh?"
BG: "Just promise me one thing..."
(Long pause between the two. after a while BG smiles faintly)
BG: "Make him happy... alright?"
(Sweet Lass looks a little confused before smiling herself and nodding. she proceeds to party and leaves BG clenching the wheel tightly with both hands. focusing on the hands clenching the wheel, a tear drop falls on it. Sudden scene change to focus on her face, tears streaming down like there's no tomorrow. She suddenly screams, unable to bear the pain of giving the guy up. Don't worry... they'll see each other again in higher spirits in the true end thing a couple of days after the party to announce their engagement.)
Also a sort of idea for the moment of defeat thing would prolly go like:
(stops car in front of the party place, turning off the engine and both silent and awkwardly stiff in the car)
Bitch girl: "Well... we're here. I guess you should get the hell outta my car or something...?"
(pause)
Sweet lass: "Ummmm... right."
(Sweet lass gets out of the car proceeds to party. Suddenly stops, turns around and looks through the open car window to Bitch girl)
SL: "Hey... *insert BG's name here*..."
BG: *annoyed* "What?"
SL: "I just wanted to say... thanks... Any way I can make it up to you."
BG: "Psh! As if an ugly, poor girl like you can grant me anything."
(Long pause again and Sweet lass puts on a sad face, proceeds to the party again. Suddenly Bitch girl calls to her at the last second through the window.)
BG: " HEY YOU!"
SL: "Eh?"
BG: "Just promise me one thing..."
(Long pause between the two. after a while BG smiles faintly)
BG: "Make him happy... alright?"
(Sweet Lass looks a little confused before smiling herself and nodding. she proceeds to party and leaves BG clenching the wheel tightly with both hands. focusing on the hands clenching the wheel, a tear drop falls on it. Sudden scene change to focus on her face, tears streaming down like there's no tomorrow. She suddenly screams, unable to bear the pain of giving the guy up. Don't worry... they'll see each other again in higher spirits in the true end thing a couple of days after the party to announce their engagement.)
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