More sci-fi practice. Found this REALLY frustrating so I guess it means its something I need to work on more! Hoping its a bit of an improvement over my last upload c:
Cheers
Cheers
Category Artwork (Digital) / Doodle
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 900 x 900px
File Size 76.8 kB
Oh wow, yes... While i can see what you mean that practice is good, this really is a decidedly marked improvement over your previous submission. If i might be so bold as to offer a criticism, what seems slightly funny to me is the angling on some of the windows... if the floors on the spire are supposed to be level, then the windows need to follow the horizon... Since you have that elsewhere, though, i'm guessing it's deliberate, just thought i'd mention that as something which looked odd to me, what with it being practice and such :)
The smaller version looks better, but that's for a reason. When it's not blown up everything looks straight and crisp where as you lose that when you enlarge. I like this and at first glance I didn't know it was your work(love pleasant surprises). My suggestion would be when you finish the pain I'd add a bit more time 'cleaning it up'. For nature pictures you don't need to do it but as this is a science fiction piece and you made it very futuristic it would benefit for more straighter lines with the curved angles.
Hope this makes sense, great improvement none the less man!
Hope this makes sense, great improvement none the less man!
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