Second submission.used to have account here a long time ago,gotten out of the swing of writing, hoping to fix that.any comments/criticism would very appreciated :)

Gazing around it sees the rest
The gleeful and the known,ready for the test
Within it's shell,like the others same
Lay pools and shades squirming in it's shame
It meshes in,unseen and accepted
But this haunted beast's sanity is bested
Try as it may,it can't break through
The unbidden desires fester in the womb
Scraping walls and fits of rage
Storm ceaselessly within it's cage
The cage will fall in given time
And tenfold will be realised the words of this rhyme
For as it glides on with the rest
And Comes upon it's greatest test
The beast will fall and shade shall rise
To taste the world with tainted eyes
And so will begin the start of the end
In a failed mind no beast can mend.