Read the story, thought it was fantastic. As a casual reader I found it pleasant and enjoyable, where as a critic reading it, I find it's a good story, great character development, but a few grammatical things, keep up the good work, and I will be keeping an eye on your writing.

Thank you very much for the comments, and yeah grammer is one of my weaker points I'm still trying to improve. Glad you enjoyed it, and hope you have a Merry Christmas.

It's really lovely. I like the way it goes and flows, the details and such.

Hehe, thank you very much.

Wow this was a good story. Good job writing it. I look forward to your other stories.

Very nice story.

In the future, and should you wish to proofread this one, a little thing that I notice many, many writers miss.

They're= Used in places where 'they are' would be otherwise. Example: They're going to get a car.
Their= Used to show possession. Example: It was their car.
There= Used when talking about location. Example: The car was parked over there.

Fix this simple thing, and you can make your writing flow a lot better. It's really good now, but every little improvement helps.

Heh yeah, I hate those three words, I know the proper meanigs of each one and I'm constantly going back and changing there to their and vice versa when I catch it, but I easily can still miss a few, heh dosn't help when you also try to proofread your story, a couple hours before the deadline of posting it. lol.

Yeah, rush jobs are pretty much guaranteed to have typos all over the place.

Aw..that's...so sweet. I almost cried in a couple of parts. Daniel's such a kind boy. I'd be his friend.

Now, with that said, as the person above me said, the story does need proofreading. I would be happy to offer my services to that end. Send me a note if you're interested.

This is by far among the best little fur stories I've ever read bro. Great job

*blushes lots* thank you very much, i really appreciate the support. I am currently working on another story and I hope to have part of it posted in the near future.

Like I told ya bro...I don't give out compliments lightly. You rocked this one.

great story

I just about had tears when reading this story. This is by far one of the best stories I've read in a long time.

Reread this story. It brings much nostalgia now! X3

Haha thanks, glad people still enjoy it so many years later.

Ever though about a sequel or remake 13 years after? ^^