This sounds so pretty <3

Thanks, I was playing with meh new toy Rapture. <3

Oooh, nice <3

Cool sounds and textures.

Thanks mate, Used Nexus and Rapture for this, and effects, so many effect. @_@

this is really cool

Thank you very much good sir. ^^

Woah... Nice suspense at the beginning, although it is long, it introduces enough elements throughout to not sound repetitive. Then the next part, where the new loops are introduced is executed well, but the sudden burst at the 2:00 mark is not as hard as I expected it would be. But the suspense throughout the song sounds like it's leading up to something, but it never reaches a proper climax I was looking for. I'm not normally negative unless the song is really really good and I think it can be even better.

Hmm, I'm going off of pretty much zero music theory (God I need it so desperately), which I won't be able to take until I finish RN school, sadly. I get what your saying, but all I really know how to do to make something hard would be effects like orchetra hits and such. My melody writing, well, it's far from where I'd like it to be. I don't know, I'm trying to improve, though my progress is exceptionally slow. Hopefully I'll be able to write good music after some music schooling, but for now I'm just winging it. Thanks mate for the crit, I need all I can get to try and improve. =)

I am lost for words... not a common circumstance for one of literary talent. You've blown me away.

Firstly let me say thanks! This song is different from my other trance works for one main reason: I mixed it. It took quite awhile longer to finish it, but mixing really helps a song out. I still have a plethora of music theory and mixing skills to learn, but I'm taking as many steps as I can towards improving! =)

In spite of my opinion that you wont need it, I still wish you the best of luck, my friend!

Free rootbeer!!! asdf