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XDragoon #22: Phillip vs. Hammer. Round 2!
Script, Art and Colors: Felipe Marcantonio
Translation Revision: Jim Eriksson
Pages: 48
December 2012
ENGLISH
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XDragoon #22: Phillip vs. Hammer. Round 2!
Script, Art and Colors: Felipe Marcantonio
Translation Revision: Jim Eriksson
Pages: 48
December 2012
ENGLISH
http://xdragoon.com/comics/en/022/index.php
Category Artwork (Traditional) / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 989px
File Size 228.5 kB
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I would change the "the" to "this" since he's talking about an object so close to him.
In addition, if you're doing 'cause as a shortening of because, you need that apostrophe in front of the c; otherwise it's just cause. Also, at the bottom you have years misspelled as yeasr.
I would change the "the" to "this" since he's talking about an object so close to him.
In addition, if you're doing 'cause as a shortening of because, you need that apostrophe in front of the c; otherwise it's just cause. Also, at the bottom you have years misspelled as yeasr.
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