Um well this is my first story i have actually started to work with my mate actually got me to start this. I have more then this done but i wanted to see what peopel think about this so far.
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Chapter 1
The time has been the same here for a while now it seems. Nothing has changed, for over ten years. People seem to be leaving and no one seems to even realize that there gone. Ever since I got to this town I seem to be wandering around without a clue as to where I am going anymore.
“Man this town is so lame,” said a wolf walking down the street. His three crimson red ear rings and neon green hair seemed to shine in the setting golden sun glow. As he walked the night breeze ruffled his black skin tight jeans and black shirt as it made them seem to blend into the slowing falling shadows. Just then there was crash from behind, which made his ears stand up and stiffen up slightly. Just then there was another crashing sound which seemed to be close this time.
“Well, well, well look what low life is in this part of town,” said a voice from the shadows.
“Oh it just you would you shut up you weak little fox,” said the wolf with a bit of fire in his tone as he turned his back on the fox. Just then out of the shadows stepped a red tail fox with his black hoodie and black jeans which seemed to go over his black army boots with a little trouble stood glare at the wolf.
“Say that to my face Zero you low life silver wolf!” Just then Zero started to walk down the again he could hear the fox over the wind as he was yelling as loud as he could, “don’t you turn your back on me the one the only Blazer!”
“You say that same line every single time me meet, and I recall the scores of the fights I believe I was in the led by oh….two thousand,” said Zero as he keep walking. As he walked a few steps more he felt a change in the air pressure that seemed to be stronger and darker. As soon as the change had happened it was gone. As Zero turned around he saw Blazers body starting to be engulfed in sparks.
“You see Zero this time I will win and you will die,” said Blazer as his calm blue eyes became as black as coal.
“Wh…wh…what happened to you Blazer,” said Zero as his voice cracked like a squeaky mouse.
“Nothing I just want to show you my true power this time around Zero,” said Blazer as his body seemed to be engulfed by flames. As Blazer grinned he ran as fast as a bullet right past Zero. Just then Zero felt a pain in his arm as he gripped his arm he noticed a red color dripping slowly from under his paw. As he slowly moved his arm so he could see what this cold feeling in his paw was, then remembered what it was blood his blood.
“What the hell Blazer we have never taken it this far not even once,” said Zero.
“Well, you see that was then this is now Zero, and I want to see your body burn to a bloody crisp,” yelled Blazer as he took a step towards Zero.
Just then Zero’s left eye started to feel weird as he dropped to his knees from the pain he noticed that his eye had started to change to silver as his right seemed to shut. Just then his voice seemed to be darker and stronger. “My power is only at 10% so come and fight me you cowardly fox.” As he finished specking Blazer though it sounded as if it belonged to a sleepwalker.
“Fine then watch as I rip the life out of you with my own flames you low life.” As Blazer started to charge at Zero the flames on his paws started to change into orbs. “Take this Hell fire inferno!” As the flames headed right towards Zero something shot right though them.
“Your flames are as weak as you are and will always be.” As the flames disappeared there holding a halberd with a lunar blade tip at the end was Zero glaring with a look that seemed to say you’re weak now it’s my turn to showing you something with a slight grin to his muzzle.
“Come on Blazer show me your weapons or are you too weak to form even a weak little butter knife,” said Zero as he laughed at Blazer. Just then the fox thrust both his red paws out to his side as fire started to spin around them. “Hahahaha come on is that the best you got fire orbs again really?” Said Zero as his tail started to wag slowly like a happy pup.
“I am tired of you calling me weak, Zero!” Said the fox as the fire orbs started to become blades. There sharp silver hilts with their crimson marks on the sides. And their black handles that were hard to see in the darkling night.
“Well that is new and they look good but is it strong enough to fight against my halberd?” said Zero. As Zero raised his halberd it started to glow brighter and brighter as if a star had explored. When it stopped he looked right at Blazer and said, “Well I guess this is goodbye” he swung the halberd hard yelling “lunar light wave execution.”
“You won’t beat me that easily, Fire Shield.” Just then a shield of flames was in front of the attack. But it wasn’t strong enough to hold back the force of the attack that was only able to hold it back for a short time. Just then the scar on Blazer’s back began to grow and spread all over his body till he was engulfed in black flames. As the force of the shield broke and the impact of the wave hit Blazer it threw him into a nearby building. As laughter echoed the surrounding area there as a voice that rang out, “Is that the best you can do really, hahaha I thought I would have a better fight in the makings you know what I am bored of you Zero, and you look too drained to move.”
As much as the wolf hated to admit it, but the fox was right he used all he had left in that attack to hopeful destroy the fox. “I…stil…still,” just then Zero collapsed onto one knee panting hard. “I can still fight you…you used up more…then me.”
“Are you sure about that really, you just helped me use up the last of this host body.” Just then zero relived that the Blazer’s movement and voice were both really were different as he stepped out of the rubble of the broken building.
“I….helped you take over…..Blazer’s body….didn’t…I?”
“Yes you did now that worthless sprit of his is locked away in me till I need to sleep but with this body I won’t need that for oh ten million years.” The voice of the fox had become something dark and dreadful. “I should leave you be I mean it seems like one of your knight friends finally found this city and after so many years of keeping it hidden.”
Just then a blue wolf in a black lose shirt and dark blue pants jumped out of nowhere holding a big buster sword that seemed to be formed out of ice itself. “Well this is where you were wow I should really thank canis this weekend, but as for you I think you well be seeing him sooner than me,” said the blue wolf.
“Not this time knight I weakened your little leader there to a point in his body that if you fight me might push him to awakening the shard in that eye of his. Oh I forgot my manners my name is Inferno now.” Just then Inferno disappeared in a burst of black flames the disappeared into the night sky.
“Damn it he got away,” said the big blue wolf as he started to turn around. “Are you…..” Just then Zero started to fall. The blue wolf ran and held zero in his arms gently but caringly it felt weird but zero had a feeling this wasn’t the first time he was his arms. Zero’s eyes started to close as he asked one question to this wolf.
“Wh…who….are….you?”
“I am silverback you’re…” Just then Zero fainted.
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Chapter 1
The time has been the same here for a while now it seems. Nothing has changed, for over ten years. People seem to be leaving and no one seems to even realize that there gone. Ever since I got to this town I seem to be wandering around without a clue as to where I am going anymore.
“Man this town is so lame,” said a wolf walking down the street. His three crimson red ear rings and neon green hair seemed to shine in the setting golden sun glow. As he walked the night breeze ruffled his black skin tight jeans and black shirt as it made them seem to blend into the slowing falling shadows. Just then there was crash from behind, which made his ears stand up and stiffen up slightly. Just then there was another crashing sound which seemed to be close this time.
“Well, well, well look what low life is in this part of town,” said a voice from the shadows.
“Oh it just you would you shut up you weak little fox,” said the wolf with a bit of fire in his tone as he turned his back on the fox. Just then out of the shadows stepped a red tail fox with his black hoodie and black jeans which seemed to go over his black army boots with a little trouble stood glare at the wolf.
“Say that to my face Zero you low life silver wolf!” Just then Zero started to walk down the again he could hear the fox over the wind as he was yelling as loud as he could, “don’t you turn your back on me the one the only Blazer!”
“You say that same line every single time me meet, and I recall the scores of the fights I believe I was in the led by oh….two thousand,” said Zero as he keep walking. As he walked a few steps more he felt a change in the air pressure that seemed to be stronger and darker. As soon as the change had happened it was gone. As Zero turned around he saw Blazers body starting to be engulfed in sparks.
“You see Zero this time I will win and you will die,” said Blazer as his calm blue eyes became as black as coal.
“Wh…wh…what happened to you Blazer,” said Zero as his voice cracked like a squeaky mouse.
“Nothing I just want to show you my true power this time around Zero,” said Blazer as his body seemed to be engulfed by flames. As Blazer grinned he ran as fast as a bullet right past Zero. Just then Zero felt a pain in his arm as he gripped his arm he noticed a red color dripping slowly from under his paw. As he slowly moved his arm so he could see what this cold feeling in his paw was, then remembered what it was blood his blood.
“What the hell Blazer we have never taken it this far not even once,” said Zero.
“Well, you see that was then this is now Zero, and I want to see your body burn to a bloody crisp,” yelled Blazer as he took a step towards Zero.
Just then Zero’s left eye started to feel weird as he dropped to his knees from the pain he noticed that his eye had started to change to silver as his right seemed to shut. Just then his voice seemed to be darker and stronger. “My power is only at 10% so come and fight me you cowardly fox.” As he finished specking Blazer though it sounded as if it belonged to a sleepwalker.
“Fine then watch as I rip the life out of you with my own flames you low life.” As Blazer started to charge at Zero the flames on his paws started to change into orbs. “Take this Hell fire inferno!” As the flames headed right towards Zero something shot right though them.
“Your flames are as weak as you are and will always be.” As the flames disappeared there holding a halberd with a lunar blade tip at the end was Zero glaring with a look that seemed to say you’re weak now it’s my turn to showing you something with a slight grin to his muzzle.
“Come on Blazer show me your weapons or are you too weak to form even a weak little butter knife,” said Zero as he laughed at Blazer. Just then the fox thrust both his red paws out to his side as fire started to spin around them. “Hahahaha come on is that the best you got fire orbs again really?” Said Zero as his tail started to wag slowly like a happy pup.
“I am tired of you calling me weak, Zero!” Said the fox as the fire orbs started to become blades. There sharp silver hilts with their crimson marks on the sides. And their black handles that were hard to see in the darkling night.
“Well that is new and they look good but is it strong enough to fight against my halberd?” said Zero. As Zero raised his halberd it started to glow brighter and brighter as if a star had explored. When it stopped he looked right at Blazer and said, “Well I guess this is goodbye” he swung the halberd hard yelling “lunar light wave execution.”
“You won’t beat me that easily, Fire Shield.” Just then a shield of flames was in front of the attack. But it wasn’t strong enough to hold back the force of the attack that was only able to hold it back for a short time. Just then the scar on Blazer’s back began to grow and spread all over his body till he was engulfed in black flames. As the force of the shield broke and the impact of the wave hit Blazer it threw him into a nearby building. As laughter echoed the surrounding area there as a voice that rang out, “Is that the best you can do really, hahaha I thought I would have a better fight in the makings you know what I am bored of you Zero, and you look too drained to move.”
As much as the wolf hated to admit it, but the fox was right he used all he had left in that attack to hopeful destroy the fox. “I…stil…still,” just then Zero collapsed onto one knee panting hard. “I can still fight you…you used up more…then me.”
“Are you sure about that really, you just helped me use up the last of this host body.” Just then zero relived that the Blazer’s movement and voice were both really were different as he stepped out of the rubble of the broken building.
“I….helped you take over…..Blazer’s body….didn’t…I?”
“Yes you did now that worthless sprit of his is locked away in me till I need to sleep but with this body I won’t need that for oh ten million years.” The voice of the fox had become something dark and dreadful. “I should leave you be I mean it seems like one of your knight friends finally found this city and after so many years of keeping it hidden.”
Just then a blue wolf in a black lose shirt and dark blue pants jumped out of nowhere holding a big buster sword that seemed to be formed out of ice itself. “Well this is where you were wow I should really thank canis this weekend, but as for you I think you well be seeing him sooner than me,” said the blue wolf.
“Not this time knight I weakened your little leader there to a point in his body that if you fight me might push him to awakening the shard in that eye of his. Oh I forgot my manners my name is Inferno now.” Just then Inferno disappeared in a burst of black flames the disappeared into the night sky.
“Damn it he got away,” said the big blue wolf as he started to turn around. “Are you…..” Just then Zero started to fall. The blue wolf ran and held zero in his arms gently but caringly it felt weird but zero had a feeling this wasn’t the first time he was his arms. Zero’s eyes started to close as he asked one question to this wolf.
“Wh…who….are….you?”
“I am silverback you’re…” Just then Zero fainted.
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