You're not a failure. End of discussion.

Thank you, but you don't know me well really, sorry for the late replys, didn't had money on my phone

I know, but I really don't like it whan someone calls themself a failure. We all make mistakes, Lord knows I have. But those mistakes are what makes you human, if you're not making mistakes you aren't truly living. Your stories, while the spelling and grammar is nowhere near par, it's your second langague! I have German as my second langague and I'm no where near comfortable enough to write stories in German, let alone let them see the light of day! And you sent them to me to revise! That takes courage to do my friend, and in all honesty you are not that bad at English. It's a difficult langague that has many grammar rules, all things considered I'm surprized at how good your spelling and grammar actually is and how you still manage to write a story using a second langague. I'll admit that's my limit to knowing you but don't give up on yourself, learn from your mistakes and make yourself better. I'm good at art now, but three years ago I could only draw stick figures, I improved myself through sheer determination and the willingness to make mistakes, my art has been ridiculed and I was called an artistic failure by one of my best friends, and now he stands in awe of what I acomplished on my own. I've never been to a professional art class, I'm self taught through trial and error. You've got to do the same, find your nitch, and live your life, don't ever let anyone tell you otherwise.

Thanks friend you gave me allot to think about and what you say is true and thanks you on the complements on my English. i am currently trying to learn. Russian as a 3rd language on my own with out any programs and i know most of the Russian alphabet. your a really good friend and i almost have no friends at all. i will really think about what you said, thank you and hope my storys doesn't have too many typos and such you take care.