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Should probably be noted that this is the first pass on a story that will eventually be a comic, so the crit that I am looking for has more to do with story structure and less to do with grammar and certain details (like location and character descriptions- which of course will eventually be drawn.)
Category Story / All
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Size 120 x 120px
File Size 196.8 kB
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