Title: John's Story.
Subtitle: John's Day at the Mall

Most people who know me know that one of the things I'm trying to make something out of my film making ambitions. A friend of mine, a film maker who's directed several shorts already, once told me that the key making movies is to be able to tell a story.

So, I figured, "What better place to start telling a story than at the mall?" I took a previously written story and expanded on it.

It's to be the first, I hope, of many chapters. All that's left, really, in terms of writing them is writing a treatment, either for the film (which I might end up writing), or, at the very least, a book about my fursona, John.

Read the story, let me know what you think. Feedback is always welcome here.