This has easily been my favorite yarn of yours since I first read it, Cap'n, and I must say you're doing a stellar job of translating it to comic form!

...Wow. 'Stellar'. That pun was wholly unintended. Nevertheless, I regret nothing!

Do you just edit vectors for this? In either case, it's pretty impressive work. Might want to take a look-see at Dash's yellow eyes, though.

Also, I smirked at her "letter to the Princess".

Aye, official vectors from the wiki (he avoids fan made vectors so he doesn' steal ifn he can help it). He also uses free clip art (like the barrel) to keep the visuals lookin kind of the same he hopes.
He's glad ye got a smile out of his humble efforts ere :)
As fer the yellow eyes it was an attempt to make her look like her real eye color has given way to a yellow glow, but it might not have worked out too well ^^;

What program do you use?

Photoshop, illustrator an comic life :)

You can get a decent "glow" by using the paintbrush in PS with the opacity set low.

Aye, the Capn' figured that shortly after he'd finished this page ^^;
He tried in out on his next picture XD

Looking forward to it ^_^

It's just so deliciously terrifying and it makes me feel guilty. Have I mentioned that I love the fact that you actually tell a story? Because I do. And what a great story it is.

I love that her eyes are glowing in the panel on the bottom left. How ominous! And the text just adds to it, especially that thing Rainbow says about "expect fewer letters". I love that line in the original. Am I a bad person for enjoying Rainbow's ruffled feathers (and bloated form)?

silly dashie, your not a pony, you're a balloon... now be a good girl and pop like one

Patience...patience... XD

Poor Dashie's in her very own nightmare huh?

Awwwww poor Dash wish my OC was on this story all though nobody has ever heard of a Dragon Pony have they.

Dashie... I hope you'll be alight. *kneels and prays for her safety* (again, I know its a nightmare.)

Yer devotion to Dash is touchin!
Especially since a few eps have sort of trodden on her a bit. At least the latest was pretty good fer her :)

Aye captn. Im sure Luma will find a way to keep the fair lass from meetin 'er demise. 'e always does.

Well, at the speed she's flyin at, the star is getting its warmth.

Rainbow Dash needs to be saved!