Heheheh. This is pretty good. I love how Brittany acted like a PokeMon trainer. X3
Can't wait for more. X3

Yeah, it just seemed like something natural to do with a Pikachu at your side, no? *snickers* Glad you enjoyed it, Danny.

Anytime. Naturality used in the most creative way. XD

Oh, new episode. *Giggles and then lower ears backwards.* Oh no. I've seen Saving Private Ryan. Hope I don't dang Team Eleven down in challenge this time.. Will Find out when read it. For now. this Vee going back to bed.

Never seen and Team 13. Lols to my tiredness.

I seriously have no idea what you're trying to say. So, for your efforts, you get some pork. *gives him some pork, specially cooked by Aaron* Oh, and you get a face-sit from the best Meowth butt around! *plops down right on top of his face*

*wave the pork as squirms under the meowth's butt.*

Heh. Another good episode.

I'm really glad that you think so! Thanks so much for your four words that explain as such, too. *hugs tightly*

Sorry, was really late at night. Just wanted to let you know I approved. If you want me to be more wordy about it, then...

I like what you did with Team Thirteen with the girls and the boys.

I like how you had the challenge play out, as twists are always fun to see in action.

I am, however, disappointed that Team 13 still hasn't gotten a win.

Oh wow! Another exciting chapter! Time for my epic comment or epicness!
First off, I really liked that I was more prominently featured, and I experienced my first gassings, yay. They may think I'm loud and stupid, but that don't mean I no no how to win game of this. ^^
The characters are getting more in-depth, and I like how each of their personalities have been defined, some more than others, but welly defined. I still feel sad that Lucas 'hates' me, but I still bear him no grudge, even though it does sting a little.
The breath taking action brought the challenge to life, and I could almost vision myself fighting for my life, though I would've sung; "War, what is it good for? Absolutely nothing! Say it again now!" Seems to be better fit. But the blood and gore was an interesting twist.
Alas, Team Avenger fell, but I wasn't shocked to see Tag go, since he never commented on anything (nor do I know who he belongs to) but I respect your decision to send him out in a manner he wanted to. Oh and I almost died when you started "making out" with Grey's ring. But anyways, totally worth the wait, and now onwards to the wait for Episode 3!

Contestant Chart Update: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9267407/

*hugs* Well this Mewtwo will root for you so don't you worry. ^^

Thank you Sagi *hugs*
I just hope Muirne treats you well ^^;

How about an epic butt of epicness? *sits on Brandon's face*

I'm glad you liked your first gassings, mostly from Lucas and Marisa; it seemed perfect to have happen to a brat like you. And, we'll see just how well you progress going forward.

Aw, stop feeling so upset about Lucas; you can't be friends with EVERYONE. That's bad for story purposes, for one. For two, it gives you a rival to try and compete with on your own team. I'm glad that you like what I'm doing with everyone, though.

Well, I don't know what you're singing, but that was the first song that came into my head. So, deal with it! *gasses right in the face*

Not every team can win every challenge. So, sadly, it had to happen. Everything happens for a reason. And...you shut up about that! *gasses hard yet again, right in the nose*

Nice new update, too~

Mmph! I'm not a brat! *flails arms like a child before gets gassed again*
You know, I guess it's not so bad, but with a rivalry, I'm not backing down so easily! This Lucario will get back up and fight! *fist pumps*
We truly have an essemble of different characteristics, and I enjoy the way you portray each ^^
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bX7V6FAoTLc <--- Perfect song
I know I know I don't mind losing, and the moment Tag started acting leadery, I knew we were screwed x3 *gets shut up by the kitty butt*
Thank chu, but don't make me wait too long for the next ep or you know what'll happen

Sooo many people a clever raccoon needs to destroy. Let's see, that neko (sexy or not, no one uses me as a seat -that- much but a certain mouse), Sagi, for stealing said mouse, Josh for... well, because Josh is Josh and that's reason enough for destruction I feel.


Aside from me needing to destroy my competition for muir- I mean, my competition for victory, though, this is going pretty great.

Wai what? It wasn't my fault, I swear! My face just seems to be a magnet for being sat upon. I didn't do anything, I swear!

You calm yourself, Ricky dearest, or else you will die! *spanks hard* Don't be mad at Sagi; Muirne is a mouse of her own. She picks and chooses who she wishes to punish and play with; she'll probably get back to you eventually. She gets to EVERYONE eventually. Either way, I hope you liked it. Love you, Ricky~

Nice one.

Thank you, Tori.

Thou i'm still not liking this virtual reality thing very much,

Thank you again for mentioning that, Tori.

System was hacked? heh...I can think of several possibilities how that happened.

Thank you yet again for sharing your thoughts on that, Tori.

Oh Lord... I was blown up by a Nade! O_O;

My Ice armor Really couldn't handle a Point Blank Explosion...

Too bad, you silly muscleheaded clown. That's what you get.

even though Aurion just put me in front of the dang thing... and though I am silly at times I am not a bad wolf I am a guardian to an anicent relic it has my Brother's Essence in it.

Great episode.

Glad you think so, Joseph.

What a sight that must have been! Poor Mewth, stuck in a dark, smelly place, while gunfire rains down all over. :o

It's kind of strange that he can now go from this competition saying, "I was trapped inside the bowels of a dead Kangaroo... and survived!"

"Aren't you proud of me, Elder Mews, for surviving this ordeal? ...No? Oh..." Whiskers droop.

Well, at least you were safe. I would've jumped in front of a gun to protect my Mew buddy ^^

I'm... I'm so touched. ;.;

*plucks you out of air and cuddles*

Meep! *cuddles back*

Murphy has a very big butt that's perfect for storing cute little Mews, so you had no reason to worry.

Oh, Mewth, what are we going to do with you? You're so damn cute and pathetic and easy to pick on. *idly sits on top of him*

Meep! *struggles futilely, rounded nose buried deep* Jmph! Mmph mm-MMPH!

Damn it Josh, why must you create another distraction to keep me from finishing my writing?

Where to start, well, I suppose at the beggining. I know I gave you a lot of crap last season for liliting yourself, but christ man! Its no wonder the wait was so long compared to the piolet and first episode. I not saying this is a bad thing, in fact, it actually fit this one quite well, though I feel you could have trimmed the fat off a little. A few times I felt you ruined what could have been a good one liner by trying to add on to it. But, thats nothing more then nit-picking, and by god the challange closer on this one was amazing! I feel bad saying this, as it makes me feel egotistical having been a major player in it, but that was truely incredible! I could even tell who was going to win that, and you caught me completely off gaurd.

And that brings me to my personal comments. Honestly, I don't know how to take my sudden boom in the searies. Don't get me wrong, I'm flattered, but having gone from a third row player at best, and a ghost at worst last season, to a major playor on my team? I really have no clue what to say. Doesn't help I'm used to being quiet and ignored anyway. And I think what really gets me is how I went from so quiet last season with team Jackass, to become almost leader-esc with Galaxy. I'm not saying I don't appreasiate it, and given it was either step up or get shot down after pulling the Volsar move, I feel it fits. I just feel so weird to be becoming one of your "star picks". And now we go to your portral of me. I'll be honest, I often feel like an odd-man out given you write such toony, butt-o-holic works, and everyone is lively and either waky or silly or angry, and everyone love butts and farts and squashing and torment and here I am being serious, quiet, and am not really into any of that, but damn... not only do you get Nine down almost 95% of the time, (which is nary an imposible feet given how little you actually know about us), but you have him saying thing I myself say while reading. The line "I win a what now?"... I literally said the exact same thing. And finally, I have to say, your use of him, given that he's almost the exact opposite of your style, is aww inspiring. Taking a story that had been so light hearted given all the... situations occuring prior to the challenge, and making it so dramatic? and using Nine (who's easily the most realisticly dramatic), and pairing him with Silenrea who's the most caring and Nate who hates him? I think the product alone makes the statement. Bravo.

Finally, One more, this season is proving to be 10x the show as the last one. You really did use your lessons well here. And though the elimination was no where near as exciting as episode ones, (not that it really could be), the challenge alone made this thing amazing.

And I don't wish to ask anything from you, and I 'm definently not suggesting this for the next one, (war movie then shooter game takes away from both), but please tell me there'll be a Bioshock Challenge *Puppy dog eyes*

*hugs* Heh, sorry for making you distracted. I'm apparently good at that.

Yeah, I know I did a little much, but since I'm not good at details in challenges, but I'm good with character interaction outside of them, that's why I waste some time with it. I'm incredibly happy, though, that you're really loving everything. To hear that from a reserved and deep-spirited individual like yourself means an awful lot to me. Believe me, this won't be the last time you make yourself known as a true competitor. Just keep sticking around to see more, as I know you will.

It's a shocker, isn't it? But, last season, I had a bunch of morons and crazy people to have fun using, so you kinda slipped under the radar a bit. But, now that it's a new season, I really wanted to focus on some certain characters and bring out their true potential. I doubt that I do THAT good a job at writing your character, but I really do try my best. As I've stated before, I try my best to picture a character in my head and figure out what they would say or how they would react to certain situations. It's actually quite fun to use crazy and random characters, and then using someone like Wolf-9. I have a cartoon hedgehog who can stretch and explode into pieces, I have a caring and soft-spoken Latias, a loud and obnoxious Lucario, a scheming Mewtwo, a TON of wild and wacky characters (mostly on Team Thirteen), and then there's you. It's a GOOD thing that you are who you are; it gives another dimension to my story! I'm so happy to have you, and I love you so very much. Seeing your acceptance is what I love, and this was another fun episode to use you in, believe me!

I'll say I learned my lessons! As you might've been able to tell, I haven't had any fights so far! Aside from Brandon whining a little at Lucas not liking him because of his species, there's been no drama! Plus, my stories are longer and share more to show off ALL characters (as shown in my Edgic, since I'm going to make sure that NO ONE is invisible this time), and I'm doing my best in every way I can.

I...am not sure what genre Bioshock even is. So, I don't know. We'll see.

*Hugs* Too good. *mummbles* making me wait for this episode then has to deliver it when I'm working on a progect...

Thats not what I ment at all. The character interaction fit quite well. I'm just saying you have a habit of trying to add too much to diologe sometimes. even if you had trimmed that down, it might have only shortened it by a page or two. Hehe, reserved and deep spirited, thats me all right. And you know I wouldn't be praising you if you hadn't deserved it ^^. And with a promise like that, I doubt I'll be able to resist hanging around.

Eh, didn't bother me much. I tend to live under the radar. And I've noticed. Hell, dropping Volsar alone proves you've changed gears in who your pulling to the surface. And I'm glad you to help bring another demention to your work. *blushes* and stop with the praise and love, your embarresing me.

Oh, and speaking of teams, I've noticed you've really formed them into their own cliches, (weather you intended to or not). Assasine's the chaotic group, given all the in fighting. Avenger's the fighter group given Aaron and Cerin and the calmer atmosphere. Thirteen is the torment group, given the team's already been separated into Dominant and submissive, and Galaxy's the dramatic group, given the overly caring Silenrea, the passionate Nate, and Myself. They each have their own feel, and each have their own thing to the story.

And as far as lessons, I'll say theirs less drama. There's still some tention, (which is uneviodable given that your using other people's charaters, and just the competitive nature of the story), but much less open drama compared to other seasons. I'll be the first to admit, I've got my own tentions brewing, but you know me better then to cause unessisary trouble. And I've definently noticed the inclusion of everyone. Not only does it help aviod drama, but it actually adds some in game, esspecailly in eliminations which had a bad tendancy of being bland in last seasons opening.

And sorry about that. Just got a little excited after the episode ^^; Bioshock's a horror shooter, and one of my absolute favorite games. Just seemes like it could make for a moody challang given its dreary atmoshpere and dark themes, (plus, you can shoot electricity and fire from your hands. Seems some of our players already fit right in.) But again, it's just my own over excited oppinion.

Oh, and sorry for not doing a confessional like last time. This one still deserves one, but the tention last one forced me to poop one out. Thought I'd wait to see where everyone elses go before I try one this time. Plus... a couple people have sort of cornered the market on these if you know what I mean.

interestin haha XD nice read

Glad you thought so, Murphy. Love ya.

well that was certainly most interesting once again, , kinda feel a little sorry for tag, but he obviously got everyone riled ;3, it's very interesting to see how this goes, your depictions of the different Characters seems very accurate and good for sure, a few of my friends in this series all seem to act like i would expect them too, you've captured them in writing form perfectly

To say i like this series enough to accept your likes and not be turned off from reading cause of some of them is very impressive, since i normally can't bring myself to do so, you've defintly got my attention, and i could see this being one of the best story sets i've ever read

Looking forward to reading more and it's defintly worth the wait between episodes ;3

Again, thanks very much for your thoughtful comments, Umber. I'm incredibly glad that I'm doing a lot of things right this time around instead of wrong. So far, nothing bad is happening, unlike last season. I'm super glad about that.

Yeah, I'm trying to make that happen in a gentle and funny way so that even cute people like you who aren't so thrilled with my own likings can still enjoy what I write without feeling frustrated. I could easily go into more depth involving the kinks I use, but I generally just do them in a comical and rather "quick" way to make the story flow better. I'm glad that it's working for you.

*hugs tightly* Thanks so much for your kind words.

Sweet! I'll comment after I've had a chance to read it.

Good to know, Neko.

Okay.

That was a mostly nice read, kind of felt it was slow in the start, but the middle and end mostly made it up for me. Also: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9407622/

You can read what I think about it Ic.

Yeah, but sometimes to show characters outside of the challenge, it must go slow to give everyone a chance to be involved. But, otherwise, I'm glad you liked it.

Ahh...let me collect my thoughts here. While I was online while you posted this, I owed you a full response rather than just a "First!" - even if it does mean Brandon got to post his comment before mine. I would have been skimming too much of things otherwise.

Losing a player may have been a blessing in disguise...and it really hammers home that I need to start making alliances. Tag was a unanimous choice for everyone else to get rid of, but it's clear that if once the dead weight is gone, I'd be up on the chopping block earlier rather than later. So I'd need to make alliances and stop being dicks to the majority of people.

...I totally need to get a picture done of me dragging Brandon into bed with his face stuffed in my ass. (Whether I have permission or not...and if I don't, then that's what in-person commissions at Anthrocon are for!) The mental image there is too precious.

Thank you for the nod in regards to Smash.

I should be a bit more mad at Muirne and and Brittany...but Sagi actually likes what he's getting...and Brittany doesn't actually mean to disrespect Sagi but Muirne does. Well...regardless, while I may not be able to directly stop Muirne from progressing in THIS game, I know one OTHER game I can make sure she doesn't advance in. Whiel I can bury the hatchet with Silenrea and Aaron thanks to discussions outside of TDVA, those new developments with Soline and Muirne are going to keep things interesting and extra competitive. THIS is what TDVA is all about!

(Also, as an OOC note, admittedly I think it was a good move to have me sit out this challenge, and the same goes for Sagi. Silenrea was already able to progress heavily using a barrier; having THREE people capable of that would have lessened much of the challenge.)

Anyway, off to do my confessional.

Brandon says the picture idea is fine, though it looks like he will want revenge as well *chuckles*

*pokes sil's belly where you are* ^w^

Muirne respects Sagi exactly the same as everyone else. She knows what people are good for, and neither species, franchise, gender or race will sway her judgement. In a way, it's inspiring- right up to the point she sits on your face

As a heads-up, I don't actually have an issue with you in regards to VST. I just promised Roco that I would help him where possible, so anything done for that is "pro-Roco", NOT "anti-Muirne." It just so happens that combining the two little setups, between VST and TDVA, would make for good drama, and thus a more interesting story as far as Lucas is concerned.

Just thought I'd explain that now. Given that Josh has gone through lengths to deal with my IRL issues with some furs I need to have SOMETHING to have him go all gung-ho about.

Heh, I understand, and no worries on that count. And feel free to try to whip up, or encourage, some IC drama between Lucas and Muirne in TDVA, but I most likely won't be reciprocating or contributing anything myself. Any conflict will probably be a bit one-sided too, since the mouse is a bit too carefree to really have any ongoing animosity towards anyone.

No worries! I always love it when you put thought into what you say instead of just doing what Gear usually does and yelling out "First! Yay, nice story! *sits on* Can't wait for more!" or something.

I'm sure you'll figure something out, since you're really smart.

I hope you get a picture of that, too. I'd love to see it, personally.

No problem; I figured you'd get a kick out of that.

Brittany is a nice rabbit girl; don't hate her. Gloria was the one who instigated it anyway. As for Muirne...oh, how fun! The deadly mouse girl against the Mewtwo? How fun!

Thanks for your thoughts, Lucas. Love ya~

I shall read this durring class and share my thoughts after lunch ^^

The baseball bat bit is totally something D-Claw would do, and the hand cuff part of the challenge really makes D-Claw have to work with others. One can only wonder how D-Claw felt about that half hour

D-Claw: >:I I'm going to my room...

D-Claw and Taijey are so much fun to play around with. Taijey is the one who mainly socializes and is nice to everyone, but then D-Claw either screws it up or makes it worse. And then D-Claw is the one who has to suffer (or excel) at the challenges. It's so much fun. I love them both. And, yeah, it seemed right for the kitty to smack those three loud morons over the head with the bat. Kara and Matthew both have big mouths that NEED to be silenced sometimes, and while she's nice, Elise's ego and butt are very large and she should be punished now and then, too. D-Claw is smart.

Maybe Cerin changed his mind at the last minute

Really glad you had fun with the newest episode, Cerin. Love you a lot! And...Cerin needs to be careful. Revealing his true form for such minor and EARLY challenges might not be such a good idea.

Someone tell that Mewtwo that it's fine to go ahead and make a picture. But mark my words I will get my revenge one way or another

Lucas knows about it. Now, we just need to find someone that would be willing to do that.

*chuckles* Ah the fun. Things will only be getting more fun from here on out.

*spanks and throws off the Empire State Building* Shoo!

Okay, so really good addition here, I liked the developments of Wolf-9 and Nate. It was also entertaining to see the way teams acted, especially Assassin and Avenger without Kara and Lucas around respectively.

I do really want to see Chrissy getting involved more with others though, and not just flattening them under her ass, but I know there are a lot of characters to juggle and that not everyone's going to get that kind of attention. I did enjoy that break Chrissy took to flatten those two from her team though, and especially thankful that she didn't end up costing them the challenge with it.

So, a mobian was kicked out this time. I can't say I saw it coming, I thought he'd make it a little farther, but hey, you mess up here and people will vote you off. I just wonder if they might have been a little hasty in their decision though, keep Tag around might have been useful for later.

Wolf-9 and Nate are such amazing and fun characters. One is so deep and serious and most of the time distant and cold that it's very hard to read them; kinda like Squall from Final Fantasy VIII. Nate is a very emotional and unstable Eevee who can't really do that much without his friends, so it's important to help build onto who he is. They're fun to work with, and with a girl like Silenrea with them, those three will be interesting going forward.

For right now, Chrissy isn't really that big a name on her team, but I'm trying! Really I am. It's just hard to give her a place to shine when you have characters like Galen, Silenrea, Wolf-9, Nate, Nyterious, Lorraine, and April to steal the spotlight. It's just so hard to do.

We'll have to wait and see.

Indeed, I look forward to where they go in their relationships.

Yeah, I know, and I really do understand, I just worry because she doesn't seem to be really ingratiating herself to her team that she might get kicked off early on, and while I can accept that happening, I really do want her to get on with some of the others first, make her goodbye meaningful and all. Unless of course she wins the whole thing, which I'm also completely fine with. ;)

Alright, I'll be patient then.

I've decided to write this as I read the episode. So far,I'm up to the Team Thirteen part, which I have to admit that I don't care much for, since I'm not a fan of males being dominated like that. I didn't mind it too much in the first season, since there wasn't much focus on it, and the males were mostly willing, so it wasn't really domination. I don't think I'll mind it too much in this season either to be honest, since there's bound to be a lot of stuff I love coming up even in this episode. Yes, I tend to prefer females getting dominated, especially when butts are involved, so I do think it could use a bit more females getting dominated by female butts, although that's just me. Last season had a bit of that, although not quite as much as I would have liked to be honest, but it was still a great season. Yes, that's an understatement.

I'm definately hoping that Gloria gets eliminated soon, as I don't like her that much. Too dominating. I tend to not like dominating creatures like her, although I'm not saying that she's a bad character I do think she's an excellent character though, as she gives a certain needed flavor to the season, so I'd be surprised if she got eliminated any time soon.

I think it'll be interesting to see how things develop between Kara and Matt as well, with their locking horns over who's the leader and stuff, so that's one thing that I'm currently looking forward to. Their rivalry gives a sweetish and unique flavor to season 2, and I like it.

Taijey and D-Claw switching control of Taijey's body is also interesting, and I think that Matt, Kara, and Elise deserved what D-Claw did to them. Well, it stopped them from arguing anyway.

Hmmmm, I'm beginning to wonder if Volsr really is gone for good or not. Knowing him, I somewhat doubt it. Either way, things are getting more interesting by the minute.

I'm now reading a part that answered one of my questions at least. *giggles at what I'm guessing Volsar made Josh do*

I have to admit that I feel a bit sorry for Mewth with how much he's being picked on.

*agrees completely with Josh about war being pointless* People really should try harder to get along.

I'm starting to get the feeling that Gloria might get eliminated if her team loses this episode. I'm up to the part where they're pickingout team leaders during the challenge now.

This challenge is getting exciting now. I wonder if Volsar had anything to do with the choice of enemies? Well, I'll likely find out once I finish reading the episode.

I'm near the end of the challenge now, and any of the four teams could win. This is very exciting!

The challenge is now finished, and I think I know who will be voted off.

*cheers for Wolf-9* I have a feeling that he'll go far. Very far.

Yup. I was right about who was eliminated. For those of you reading the comments before reading the story, I won't spoil who got eliminated. I love how the elimination was done too. *kisses Josh's butt even though I liked how the elimination went and giggles*

Something tells me that Josh is going to wish my comment wasn't so long. *giggles again* Well, until next episode, ciao!

Thanks for your support *blushes slightly*

You're welcome.

Um...I CAN'T have females dominating females if there's still several males on the team, too! What, are they just supposed to stand around and watch, or dominate other males? It just isn't logical. Yes, most of the females are indeed bisexual and would love to gang up one another, too. But...it's just so much more hilarious when the usually-dominant male gender is punished by females.

Gloria is indeed rather loud and obnoxious; she's basically my Violet this season. Except without the unwanted drama.

Kara versus Matthew is indeed one of the many subplots I'm trying to create; it's so perfect! I'm incredibly happy I managed to get Kara's owner to sign her up, as it works well with Matthew's own sense of entitled heroism.

Those two kitties are so sexy and fun to play around with, and yes they did indeed deserve what they got.

Volsar is Volsar. He screws up everything. He's screwed up the entire world, if you ask me!

*glares* Shut up.

Hey, Mewth secretly likes it; just check his profile. But...yeah, that's what the poor Mew gets.

I hate war. I hate them so much. One of the many reasons why I'm Democrat.

Don't count on it; Gloria is loud and rude, but she's realized the big picture of her team. The girls outnumber the boys, 7-6, so if they lose a challenge, the girls will simply eliminate one of the males. Apparently.

Again, never underestimate Volsar. If something goes wrong, chances are we can blame him and be correct.

I'm glad I kept it exciting right to the very end.

Oh, you do?

*smiles* Wolf-9 is a very underrated character I somewhat overlooked in season 1, and felt bad for. So, you might be right.

*squeezes the cutie and kisses them back* Glad you enjoyed it.

Your long comment makes me happy, so no worries~

What you say does make sense, and I'm glad you like he length of my comment too. I certainly look forward to reading future episodes too.

WOOOT I'm on the title sequence! heehee! I love it! poor tag though. i know for a fact how much that mountain hurts..... *rubs head.*

*rolls eyes, then face-sits and gasses the Vaporeon* You talk too much, you goofy little sidekick of a Lucario!

mph! Mph!" *flailing under you, trying to push you off*

oh my! it appears I have started a trend! I see many people giving 'observtions' now in their posts, better not let them outshine me!

1. I honestly loved how you capture Matthew in this type of situation, hes upset, but puts it aside for the team.
2. The three way argument was hilarious...also the ghost...i like the ghost >X3
3. I absolutely LOVE how you are giving insights and character developement alot more than last season, you are so into your work and it shows how much love you have for it!
4.Poor Sagi....i honestly hope the next challenge Assassin wins is a reward to trade someone for another teams member... i know just who I would trade...and no, it's not Kara. Believe it or not she's actually grown onto me, and she is vital to this teams survival.
5. Also... Taijey/D-Claw? Work well together alongside me and we have somewhat of the same devious thinking...even though I like 'playing the hero' most cases. I like 'em!
6. Poor Mewth...getting bullied by gear like that? I like mewth, and if he'd just talk to me he'd not have to be bothered with some intimidation. >:(
7.Saving Private Ryan....i loved this movie very much. It sucks that we came in second I had my ass wacked by a sexy, kinky cat...but hey, atleast it was better than losing a teammate.
8. I Really hope Aaron can pull his team together, I still have plans for you...my darling little mobian~
9.....*watches Wolf-9 die*....drama queen....
10.poor tag got eliminated... sorry buddy, better luck next time :/

41 one pages! oh my glob that is such a huge episode, and it's not even climactic! Josh, keep this up, characters, setting, action, appeal, sex, vore....you put so much heart and kink into your story, i'm absolutely jealous that I can't just sit down and write something like this! Oh and...*grins* after seeing the enemies in the challenge...Matthew knows a little secret.... *winks*

1. I did my best. Using so many dynamic characters is NOT easy, since many of them are very important and special, and I still want to try and give EVERYONE some airtime.

2. Glad you enjoyed that, my cute Blaziken.

3. Aw, Mattie, you're making me blush! But, thanks so very, very much! I'm really glad you're loving what I'm selling.

4. Don't bet on it, you silly goofball. But, it's nice to know that you care so much about the silly Mewtwo.

5. Taijey and D-Claw are both such awesome kitties. A bit annoying and obnoxious, but I love them.

6. Mewth seems like someone who can easily be swayed by someone more powerful than him, so he's a perfect target to bully. It's sad, really. But, since Gear is now bipolar and has a sadistic side, I wanted to show that side of him.

7. It's an incredible movie for a reason, you know. And, hey, a spanking from Frost isn't the worse thing in the world.

8. I can't wait to see Aaron's face after that comment.

9. Oh, be nice! Wolf-9 is a very passionate wolf, just like you're a very passionate chicken.

10. Yeah, but them's the breaks.

*blushes badly* Um, thanks so very much, Matthew. Your praises are incredible, and I thank you so much for them. Thanks for reading after what you've just gone through with your lung and all, and I hope this could bring you a little joy. We all love you!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R3u_Ugle5OE

Surgery can kiss my ass ;3

Again a awesome ep joshy, season 2 is off to a great start :3 It seems that even though hes gone Volsar still has some influence floating about X3 I wonder just what the sneaky abra was up to before the sudden voting off last ep, im sure we'll see in the coming episodes

Thanks very much, Lorraine. Oh, and yeah, Volsar may be "dead", but he's never gone. So sad, huh?

Haaaiiii!! Its meeee agaiiiin!!!

So yeah!! I think this time open office said it had 55 pages. A small question! How many pages do ya write in a day? Like... approximately?

Also! An idea!! Maybe you could add a small piece of info on your journal, saying the progress of the story! So it would be easy for me to expect a story! Without having to wait and wonder when the next one comes! X3

But anyways! Lets get down to buzziness. Well the first part was pretty much introductions wasnt it? It was meant to give some more indepth look into the teams. It was kinda uneventful for me, as i personally like reading the challenge parts better- There are so many characters in this that it makes it kinda difficult for me to remember who is who. But I suppose the reading will get easier the longer i read the series.

The challenge part was fun as usual! Even though I dont really like war-stuff, it was still good! Its always fun to follow the rivalry and spite the mean kinda chars share around the other teams. XD

Then a lil bit of Terra facts. ....Well Terra had a really minor role in this part, so there isnt much to say! One small thing though! Terra mentioned something like... spanking twiggy? I can imagine her sitting on the pikachu, as pikachus look like bags of wheat afterall. But Terra would never hurt her friend. Its a shame she wasnt useful at all in the challenge though! But shes not really too familiar with shooting things afterall, so I suppose its pretty much inevidable.

X3 Also! Sum criticism! I know cliche things quite well! And its a bit cliche that the team who lost the last time wins the next time with some amazingly wonderful effort. I doubt your fans read this story because they all want to be heroes in the story! Youre a good writer! They read the story because they love the whole concept of the contest and they love to see it written by you and your epic devotion to the work.

So this is just an oppinion! But the teams shouldnt be balanced out just to make the losing teams feel better.

PS. Dont make my team the losing team. XD Just kidding. Im fine with anything!!

I hope youll find my comment useful in the future stories! And ill wait eagerly for the next part!!

P.P.S Its not PSP Vita. Its PS Vita. *grin*







......P.P.P.S Sorry. I couldnt resist mentioning that.

From what I remember from last time, Josh isn't afraid to include a few losing streaks. I agree with you though that he shouldn't start trying to keep things balanced now. One of the big advantages of this all being one guy's story rather than a real competition is that things don't have to be "fair" and there's lots of potential for fun and drama from lopsidedness.

Indeedy!! Though since its merely starting, I dont think we have to worry about this kinda stuff yet. X3 I bet there will be enough drama for all of us when the story starts getting further!

Yes, it's you again. My darling Terra. *hugs*

Well, this isn't the only story I work on; I work on other stuff, too. I typically write between 10-20 pages a day, if I'm feeling motivated.

I would, but I can't just screw up my journal to add that information. I have OCD, and I like to keep things very neat, and putting that in would interrupt how neat it is with its current information.

Well, I'm better with character interactions than I am with the challenges; I'm not good with details. They're one of my few weaknesses. I'm sorry it was uneventful, but it had to happen. I can't just go right into the challenge right off the bat; that's terrible writing.

Glad you had fun with that part!

Okay, good to know. She wouldn't want to hurt him at all, at least physically. But, sitting on him with her big butt and stuff would work.

Huh? Um...the winners for each episode is done with who I logically think WOULD win the challenge. It's not because who came in last suddenly comes in first. Team Galaxy is a very strong and talented team; Volsar just screwed them over, otherwise they could've easily won in episode 1. So, it wasn't supposed to be cliche; it's what I honestly saw happening. But, thanks for your concerns, dear. You'll see what I have planned for later.

Oh...right. I had a feeling it was PS Vita, but it just looked weird.

I'm a big fan of saving private ryan and let me tell you, reading this was better than watching the movie!
I laughed and I cried (that scene always gets me). Another edge of the seat finish and the length is perfect. I might do another confessional later.

I'm so glad to hear you say that! Yeah, it's an amazing movie, and while I'm not very great at details, I did my best to put humor in a very horrible situation.

Just reserving a place to post my comment when I read it over notes so the comments don't become too numerous and disable me from posting here.

I sent you the notes.

Excellent job. I love the conflict between Richter and Kara. This episode made me giggle all the way through. Gore and violence makes me laugh for some reason. As for criticism, do you think you could try fitting in more oral vore themed stuff in the future? Anal vore seems to be the only thing being used in the virtual world. Not that I'm complaining, I'd just like to see a little more love for both the maw and the ass. Anyway nice job. I look forward to part 3. Now to do my post episode confessional.

But...there's nothing really oral to do. What's so sexy or fun about the mouth? But, either way, thanks for liking it! Glad you had fun.

*glares* Well maybe I'll have to show you what's sexy and fun about it. *licks lips*

*stands in front of* you can use me as a demonstration ^^

Haha, sure there is! there are a few smaller contestants that you could have certain contestents nom down in virtual reality, It would be rather easy. although, I am not in any way complaining about the abundance of anal vore- I do agree with Richter a bit here- Oral vore is pretty great, and I'd love to see it given some love.

Yay I didn't die and I got my face in a cute boy's rear <3

Still... I wouldn;t mind trying him on as a diaper >:3

Nyterious does indeed have a very nice butt.

And, yeah, tell me about it! He so deserves it.

Mmm I definitely need to try and get more of that ass of his >.< *grins* Or... at least turn him into a diaper or a sexy statue as a trophy. And if I remember correctly a certain meowth also deserves a treat about now for agreeing with a diety such as myself >:3*grins evily and pulls out a huge messy diaper from his pail and puts it on and crams you inside it making sure yer trapped in the hundred pound mess inside it before sucking you up his ass* Enjoy lil joshy >:3

0_______0;;; *is so going to kill SilverFang for this, and Volsar by default for poorly influencing him before the game*

*giggles* hehe you know you love it *lets out a massive fart that shreds the back of his diaper and launches you out into the diaper pail*

lol, that was quite entertaining. it sucked i just got to reading it. i saw this up this morning and did not have time, so i had to wait until now. lol i cant even stay awake when i try apparently lol, i will just get knocked out XD. I look forwards to these stories so much, hehe and i am happy i did not get eliminated...though got dominated a bit :P Thoroughly enjoyable, thanks for writing it :P

You're very welcome, and thanks for reading! Homicide is like my Fissure from last season; big and clumsy, no one likes him, yet is very hilarious and is fun to make him do random and crazy stuff.

i have to say, it may not be how i play him, but it is fun to read, lol.

The mission is a man.

Nice story, poor guys who got shot :C Also is the place being haunted? Or whats going on O.o hehe sexy part with Grey and Joshie. Daww Anthony loves April. Crazy that those pokemon and digimon showed up. I wonder what will happen next, so many questions!

April: *nomming down on good food* Told you all Wolf-9 was a good guy~

This mission is a what now?

Yeah, but that's war. Oh, and yes, the place IS being haunted. But, April is under no danger, trust me. I love April so much, and while she doesn't have a MAJOR role right now, I predict she'll be around for a long, long time.

*cheers for April* You go girl~

hehe The mission is a Gardevoir XD - Saving private... Galen


April: Come here lover boy *hugs you tight into her cleavage*

hugs from April are the best ;3

yay :3 thank you oh and here is more on April, April does not have powers but she does have demonic help from Nedra. Nedra is a succubus who is April's hidden gun. Nedra gave April her hat and rope. The hat gives April death sense and steel mind. Mind readers cant read April's thoughts nor can April be effected by energy that targets her brain. The other part is the death sense with this April can instantly know when something bad is about to happen and redirect it so if it was to kill her it would not. It's kinda like spiderman's spider sense. Her other gift is the rope, the rope is unbreakable just like April's hat only if something happens to Nedra will they fall apart this also means her items will not work for someone else. Her rope can act like a whip or even shrink people down for a bit if she ropes them up in it. The rope can also increase or decrease in size or length.

Nedra is a succubus who's duty is to punish demons who escape hell by eating their souls. Nedra is not the strongest of punishment succubus so she needed April's help. Thanks to a contract deal Nedra is sealed to April and to fit her skills became a gun, and together they help one another out. April does not like people knowing she has Nedra so she keeps this all hidden unless she has to fight some kind of super natural force. When that happens April will say "Reaper mode activate." this reanimates Nedra into her gun or any kind of weapon she needs.

Great episode Josh. Shame that Team Avengers got its first elimination ceremony, but at least its 1 less contestant to worry about.

Thanks so much, Char. Yeah, it's quite a shame, but it was bound to happen. The team has a few major flaws that are quite visible to anyone with a brain stem, so this is probably not the last time they'll be going there...

flaws eh? well then. We need to get rid of these flaws so that we won't lose another challenge.

It's not exactly something you can get rid of. See...your team is all male, except for two females. Plus, with those males, you have many egos who are powerhouses and care about themselves a lot. It conflicts with team chemistry, and it usually leads to total dysfunction. You can try to fix it, but I'm telling you that it won't work. Just...be warned. *hugs*

well even if I can't fix those flaws, we could still manage to work together and win ourselves a challenge for once. *hugs back*

Agreed. And I'm sure there are ways to work around the flaws.

I will make a comment in the style of one of those "Confessionals" you like so much either later tonight or within the next week, when I'm at my PC instead of on my phone. For now, just know that I'm nodding with approval with your portrayal of me.

Awesome. I can't wait to see it, Neko. *hugs tightly* Love you, you crazy cat-wings creature.

Here goes... Ahem...

Quite an unfortunate turn of events today, yes... I'm no stranger to dying, but it still hurts every time, even in a virtual reality. I stand by the decision we all made - Tag really wasn't up to the task, and eliminating him is for his own good as much as it is good for the team. It would have been a shame to see him broken by getting himself into trouble in challenges harder than this one. Yes, he'll be much happier on the outside, once he gets over his failure... And any injuries sustained upon landing... And no, it isn't just because he got me killed, or because he sat on my face and wouldn't let me out... Though I do believe letting me see would have improved our directional skills reading that map... And not following an enemy into a trap... Well, what's done is done. Looking over the footage from after I died, I see that Lucas is still holding that racist grudge he told me about when we first met... Such a shame... Brandon was trying to help him, and rather than give him advice, he just sat there refusing to allow himself to be rescued by him simply because he belongs to a species chosen by people not even of that species - HUMANS, in fact - to take his place in a game. A GAME. While I do understand his reasoning, I cannot agree with it. I cannot tolerate racism of any type. His grievance should be with the ones responsible, not with the species in general, and especially not with a lone member of that species who has never personally wronged him even once. That kind of attitude, and the racism itself, does not bode well for our teamwork. If you somehow see this, Lucas, I'm sorry, but I've felt this way for some time. Either work through your issues and get over your racism, or put it aside for the good of the team.

*Picks up a Wii U gamepad*

I should really start thinking about alliances...

*Turns on the Wii U gamepad*

Ooh... After this game...

*Begins playing*

I wonder where one could sign up to spend the night in Char like Cerin did... Ooh, I need those coins... Jump!

I hope I did that right...

Wow, I really liked it ^^
Thanks for standing up for me *hugs*

You're welcome! *Hugs*

Ah, Sorry I missed this when it came out.. But, Huzzar! i'm glad its finally out! :)
I cant fully respond to it now, cause I havent finished it yet.. But, I am LOVING how you portrayed Elise.. :) Absolutely loving it. Its a wonderful episode thusfar.. :D
I'll make my confessionals after I have enough time to read this all and do that.. so, It may be a day or two before I can do that.. I'm sorry if I take rather long.. ^^; its not that I don't care- I care very much. I LOVE this!- I'm just rather busy.

No worries; I'm just glad when you read it. Regardless of when that is.

I'm glad you're liking how I'm portraying Elise. I want to use her more, like you wanted, so I hope it's working.

Good luck to you; I can't wait to see it, since they're always usually funny and sexy.

Okay :)
Its working incredibly well, my friend :)
Thanks! :) I'll start work on them as soon as I can. :) I promise not to dissapoint.

Heh, poor Tag. A few very ditzy characters survived for a long time in TDVT, but they were mostly off in their own world. Being so silly and drawing attention to himself was a fatal combination, I guess! By the way, just a suggestion, but I noticed last series that sometimes if a very minor character was getting voted off in an episode, they'd suddenly have a lot more attention that episode, and it happened a bit with Tag this time. If you have all the eliminations planned out, which I think you said you did, you might take advantage of that to give characters a bit of focus starting an episode or two before their elimination, so it's less obvious. Just a suggestion!

Pairing Muirne with Sagi... yikes you just want Mewtwo on my case, don't you! But hey, everyone should just be glad she's using her, er, talents on somebody who appreciates them for a change. And when she gets antsy for somebody a bit less compliant (and believe me, she will), there's usually a Meowth within arm's reach! Still, at least she seems to be on a team which suits her.

Out of curiosity, did she AV Denco again in reality after the challenge? It doesn't say so, but it's implied by her confessional comment. Poor guy! I can just imagine him removing the VR headset in relief only to find his view eclipsed by a freckly behind

Good episode in all! I think a challenge like this has the potential to drag a bit, especially with 4 teams who have to be updated with their own separate progress, but it was a fun, easy read, so you handled it well.

Tag's owner ultimately is never around and never comments anyway; I know a certain Giratina that would rage at me for using that logic, but I don't care. While I love Tag's character, I simply could not keep him around over more deserving people. So, I created a logical and realistic situation that would ultimately be his doom. Yes, I realize that it was kinda obvious, and I feel a bit ashamed for that, but it's only fair. See, last season I eliminated many contestants basically randomly and without giving them ANY airtime before they were sent off! Sure, they kinda deserved it due to never commenting and making me waste room for them, but it still made me feel a little guilty. So, I wasn't just going to have Tag have no speaking lines, then get voted off at the end for no reason. I'll try to work on not being so obvious in certain areas, but sometimes you can't help it.

Aw, Lucas is a hothead, but he's not that bad. Besides, it's good for drama. The GOOD drama, not the bad kind that involves stupid Latios' or herms or other idiot characters. Muirne is so much fun to play with, and it seemed only fair that she got Sagi. *shrugs*

Yeah, Muirne kept Denco for the time being; Soline can be mad all she wants.

Believe me, I DID drag out the challenge, and it really annoys me. Believe it or not, the challenge is always the most annoying and stressful part for me. The rest is all easy, as I'm great at creating drama and character interactions. I'm bad at detailing, so I don't really enjoy the challenge parts. But, all the same, thanks!

Oh, yeah that first bit I didn't mean you shouldn't give them some airtime before sending them off, I totally agree you should!

Soline needn't be mad, there's plenty of room if she wants to go in after him

As for the challenges, I understand! You obviously have most fun with the character interactions and it's what you write most fluently. But you have a lot of genres coming up which are less physically-oriented. Hopefully you'll get a chance to focus more on the stuff you like rather than action sequences for those.

Oh man, even without Volsar my face is still a magnet for everyone's butt!
I don't think Muirne has anything out for me, I mean it's just the way she is. Not that I mind really. ^^
Poor Brandon though, seems to be made into Lucas' own little toy himself. And even when he's trying to help he gets shunned, poor guy.
And a grenade launcher fits since I loves me some explosives. Bad guys go boom!
Poor Tap though, everyone ganged up on him for being a carefree guy. It's a bit disheartening when it's a unanimous decision but at the very least he was able to go the way he wanted to.
Also, how the heck could my tail be mistaken for as a snake? It looks nothing like one...well perhaps and Ekans or Arbok maybe.
I do hope our team will be able to get a win soon, I know I'll try my bestest to do so!

Don't worry, Sagi. If all goes according to plan, you'll have your time in the sun a little later. And probably not in the way you would imagine.

Muirne is such a wildcard. She doesn't really have anything against ANYONE; she just loves everyone equally. She loves to punish them, I should say. She's not an evil character in the way of the heart. She's evil in the sense of her head and her ass. It's hard to explain.

Brandon is like Shane from last season, in many ways. Both nice and loving characters, but as such, nice guys finish last. Or at least get a lot of punishment for no reason.

Grenade launchers are so fun.

It's TAG, not Tap, you dope. And...yeah, I know. But, I just honestly didn't see any other way how it COULDN'T be unanimous. I had Aaron and Lucas give their reasons for why they honestly COULDN'T vote for anyone else, due to what it would say and how it would put a target on them. I do everything logically, and while it's mean, it happens all the time. Including in Survivor.

Well, when I think of a Mewtwo tail swishing around in the darkness, I think of a big fat snake. That's just me, though.

Don't count on it. Team Thirteen is basically that one team that isn't dreadful, but doesn't have the overall skills to be great. But, we shall see, my energetic and cute Mewtwo.

Aww man...that means my butt is gonna be sore and red for a very, very long time. D:

You always have Lucas to give it some kisses, if you want.

Alright, no two-sentence responses, eh? Let's see what I can do.

This was a really fascinating challenge. I've never seen the movie the challenge was based off of, but I can assume that you kept it pretty close to the original. Anyway, I think I have less of a grudge for Wolf-9 now. I'd rather be a friend to him than an enemy. Especially after he took that bullet for Mistress Silenrea and myself. I still have an interest in being friends with several of the contestants, including Mewth and Brandon. We'll just have to see how this goes, right? Well, I'll write my first confessional tonight and get it posted up tomorrow for you :3

Yeah, I tried to build on your grudge and Wolf-9's deepness in this episode. Along with Silenrea, I think it worked pretty well. Right now, you three are easily the driving force for that team, and it was fun to play with it. I'm glad you liked it, and whatever your next confessional is of, I'm sure it'll be great.

I don't know.

Man I feel bad now after seeing everyone else's comments and reading a few. Wish I could remember the story that well. I just finished it and everything.

*hugs tightly* Don't worry about it; whatever you have to contribute or say is more than enough.

Thanks, hun :3

Somehow, even the parts of this that have content I'm not normally fond of, I have found a joy to read with your writing style.
Also, totally enjoying the way you portray me, Joshy.

*chuckles* You have no idea how happy you make me when you say that. To know that I can make people actually enjoy my writings, even if it involves stuff you don't really like, it really warms my heart. Thanks so much, Nyterious! Love you. Oh, and I'm glad I'm doing a great job with you so far.

Side note; typing with your wrist over the mouse is not good when the cursor hovers over the done button.


...As I was saying, Love the way you portray me, Joshy. Totally looking forwards to the next big challenge now.
Now to get some Visine, as I didn't stop reading the whole time. @.@

*hugs tightly* Poor guy.

That content wouldn't happen to be involving the wuff who loved having his face in yer rear would it?

Franky this episode was cute.

I liked a majority of the story of course, but it saddens me to see such little scenes of me and me barely being in the story. How ever my parts are usualy the one character who does the most outlandish thing to try ot win (But usualy ends up failing) or is that one character in the background doing something completely out of text, which of course, adds a bit of comedy in where all scenes serious.
That being aside the story is good, informative and especialy the gassing parts which always have me gripping at my chest from laughing too hard.
Hehe, poor Meowth.

Anyways, I can't wait for the next episode~

Now I'mma get some root beer <3

*hugs tightly* Sorry about that, Spencer dearest. It's so hard to fit any and all characters into the episodes, you know? But, still, I'm glad you laughed. I love it when people laugh at what I write.

-Huggles- Its alrighty~ :3

But hey, atleast they make me laugh too x3

Ok. Gotta be straight: That was, surprisingly, comically hilarious. XD

And that makes me incredibly happy to hear! I love it when others find it hilarious and funny.

Kudos to you for your skill at writing such amusing stories, I heartily approve.

Enjoy your late night snack Joshy? I know I did. Lovely little scene you threw together that, certainly wouldn't mind it happening again.
Nice to see a few more lines for Aly as well, and I have to say even though it was disappointing to see her taken out like that, the way it happened was interesting, pondering death like that and planting her skunky behind on Elise. Good to see shes making friends the only way she knows how. With her butt.
I wont lie, I've never seen Saving Private Ryan, and there will probably be a few ill natured remarks made to me because of that but I'm not really a movie person, so it will be a rare thing to have seen most movies portrayed here. I will say though that you did the whole war scene very well, and had quite a few interesting situations.

Over all, as always, you've done a great job here and looking forward to the next episode. I'm loving that you're no longer restricting yourself to a page limit, I like a good long read.

On a side note, I might start smearing food in my ass crack before bed just to give something for my favorite little butt muncher to snack on besides my dirty hole ;3

Love ya Joshy

*growls* You shut up, you sexy-butted hyena-wolf!

Yeah, I'm glad you were happy. It's just so hard to make certain characters stand out when each team has nearly half the players as last season, and each team has some star-caliber players! I mean, on Team Assassin alone, we have the hotheaded Kara, the wrestler Matthew, the kitty Taijey with D-Claw inside her, the wimpy Mewth, the futuristic gassy Elise, the wrestling tub of lard Murphy, and even the scheming Gear! It's HARD to give players more time, you know?

Sorry about Alyssia dying, but that's war; there are always sacrifices, even if you really don't like seeing them. It was still funny how it happened, and Alyssia face-sitting Elise afterwards was always fun. To be honest, I haven't seen Saving Private Ryan. But, it DID win a lot of awards, and it got very high praise from around the world, so it's clear it's a good movie.

I'm glad that YOU like a long read; that makes me feel good. I keep worrying that I'm going to get people just skimming and making me mad. If I put in the work, you can put in the reading.

*glares deeply* Again, you shut up, or else I'm going to punt you into orbit!

...love you too, Grey. Always will.

Never

No need to apologize about Alyssia dying, it happens in war and as I said it was done in quite the interesting way. I do like the after death dialogue with her, I wont lie it made me think of the conversations with the dead from Assassins Creed, making perfect sense considering she's on Team Assassin.

I know it's hard to make certain ones stand out. Not only do you have all of the members of Team Assassin to make stand out, but all the members of the other teams as well. It's good to see her having a few roles and lines but I don't expect her to play a major part until later when there are less contestants or you get some crazy good idea to use her for something.

I love long reads, I have had no issue with how long you make these. As you said you put hard work into this and putting a limit of pages to it makes your job even harder, not to mention it restrains how much detail you can put into it. Getting rid of the page limitation for this was the best decision you have made for the series, aside from not allowing a certain few characters to return from last season any way. *snickers*

Don't you look at me like that, you know you'd love it

Well look at that. I think you see the advantage to have Marisa be one of the only girls in team avenger. *smirks* I think Marisa secretly knows who to choose as her next "playmate" after the while elimination thing.

Oh, is that right? Well, I guess we'll have to see then! But, yeah, it can't help but happen! With only "female" Yoshi to be there as well, it's only natural that Marisa gets a lot of the "fun time" with the boys.

Heh naturally. :3

http://girlfartlover.deviantart.com/#/d5nkilp Confessional Done!

1) *swats forehead* I'm back to sceming again? Great, i thought I said I WASN'T gonna do that.

2) *skims over the female-on-male abuse*

3) sigh, really? I'm just gonna throw my own team mate under the bus like that? -_- I don't know why I even bother anymore. Seriously, what happened? the first couple episodes you portrayed me well, snarky and trying too hard, but a good guy who just wants to play the game and have fun, and now you're back to making me a maniacle asshole who plans to backstab his friends at his first earliest convenience >:(

4) Also, that's a shitty plan. A way better aproach would have been to hop on my terra board and have Cerin fly and pull me along like a wind surfer. That way, not only am I leading the pack like a real leader should, but I could cover Cerin with my free hand to make sure he doesn't get shot down or something.

5) Well, at least you made me feel bad for throwing Tag under the bus :( least I can take solice in knowing you think I'm a caniving jerk with a conchince

6) well aside from that once scene in the begining where me and Tag were being all cute and happy, from my prospective, that episode fucking sucked. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go eat a gun. *shuffles off, leapping up onto the roof and leaping from building to building before sitting on his team's barrik's roof to mope, a storm cloud brewing over his head*

Personally, I'm sick and tired of all these powers and skills and crap. I'm sick of all of Cerin's "forms", I'm sick of all your powers you seem to get every single episode, and I'm tired of everyone trying to manipulate what I do. If you don't like it, fine. Be that way. It had to be done anyway; Tag's owner never paid any attention, so that's what happens.

My powers aren't the issue here, they don't change and I can freaking spell them and my weaknesses out if you want.

The point I want to make is that I don't like how you portrayed me in the show confessionals saying things like I would make my teammates look bad so I look good and use Tag as a scape goat. I'm not a dick like that, nor is my character, and you know that I don't like being portryed like that. If I want my team to like and respect me as a leader, then I'm going to be a good person and act like a good leader, simple as that. Not scheme behind there back to backstab and double deal my way to winning a game I've already won once. There's only so much of being made out to be an evil prick that I can take with a grain of salt before I just freaking ragequit, y'know? I've got more than enough emotional BS to deal with in my life without my friend saying what a maniacle douche he thinks I am.

My my, what an episode!
I loved it! every second of it! I'm sorry it took me so long to read, finding the time is a bit difficult during the week..
Anyway, like I said, your portrayal of Elise was amazing! :) I absolutely loved it. You made her come off as the silly, gassy, ditzy wolf girl she is! absolutely wonderful :) I also loved the attention she got this episode, and, although some was a bit negative (like dying, for example), I think she did too..
Everything was handled rather well in my eyes. you are MAGNIFICENT with your character interactions! Characters I know, or am familiar with act just as I imagined they would, and the ones that i'm becoming aqauinted with act as I'm coming to understand that they should. The series is being handled incredibly well. This season is going to be- and already is- Kick Ass! I enjoy every scene, every part of this story. Even in parts where its mainly just characters I don't like or characters I don't care for going against a character I'm rooting for, and said character is being slammed on. I enjoy it because you handle everything so beautifully. I got lost in the story, actually. Lost track of what time it was. I was planning on reading till 12:30 am CST, then going to bed.. and its 3 in the morning.. I forgot that I was supposed to be doing something. haha, It was nice- especially after the busy, stressful week I've had. (also, on an unrelated note, TDVA seems to go together really well with the final fantasy 7 soundtrack as background music.. O.o)
So, I think even though the challange dragged on a bit (and I admittedly skimmed a few parts with just Team Avengers in it..), it was still fun to read. and,It was semi suspenseful reading and trying to anticipate the winners of the challenge..! (I read comments first,I hate total suspense, it gets me worked up, and then I get all pumped, and it never turns out like I expect it to, so I tend to spoil a bit for myself in anything and everything that I read/play/watch..) Even though I didn't want Elise to die, I love how she died. Totally something Elise'd do in my comic XD It was just.. perfect. I think I know how my first confessional is going to go already..
So, anyway, please, keep up the good work! I cannot wait to read more!
and, I will start work on my confessional(s) tommorow night.. so, expect to see them sometime tommorow night or sunday.

Ha, there's no reason to stay up so late just to read this, you know. That's so nice of you to do, regardless. I'm really, really glad that you liked it for the most part. Yeah, I tried to get Elise a slightly bigger and silly part just for you. Final Fantasy 7 is my favorite game, too, so it's no wonder you say that. I'm mostly happy that you can just read it and get a smile on your face afterwards; that means everything to me. I can't wait to see your confessionals, too. Thanks so much.

:) Well, thank you for that. It worked in her favor, and it turned out pretty well. :) and, awesome! 7 is pretty fucking awesome. people say its over rated, but I think it gets the love it deserves. Hey, no need to thank me, actually I should be thanking you! this series is turning out amazing! I truly cannot wait for the next episode!

Once again, another fantastic episode. You manage to perfectly blance comedy with sexuality, and wrap it all up with some action and drama. The virtual reality thing is awesome, it gives you an opportunity to do things during challenges without having lasting effects. The deaths during the challenge felt real, but in the end the characters were okay. I liked that. All in all, a great story ^_^ I can't believe how many people start this RL drama over "how their character is potrayed". Just ignore them. Your stories are awesome

Thanks so very much; I'm incredibly happy that you liked it and, in your eyes, I'm doing what I need to be doing to be successful. Again, thanks for reading and for commenting honestly.

Oh, noes! Mewth is a pet, now! :o

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9420964/

I noticed, furry butt. *flattens with a rolling pin, then cooks into a pizza pie*

Soft-crust or extra crispy? |3

Awesome :3
Great chapter, still standing so that's good for me *sits down next to you* ^w^

And Yay you used Gears Bad A** side =D

Glad you enjoyed it, and yeah I did. *pats*

*licks my lips* care for a trip up my rump? ^^

I also forgot to mention my favorite part of this episode was when Team 13's females took over leadership of the group, choosing a guy to torment. That was just plain awesome.

Ha, I'm glad you loved that part.

Sorry it took so long, but I'm caught up now. I can already see this is going to be a wonderful season! I added a confessional in response

That's great to hear. Thanks very much, Kali.

Hehe, with a little collaboration, it turned into a little miniseries XD

These are awesome! You are doing a great job on this :D

Thank you very much for those kind words~

well, here I am, finally getting comment this X3; sorry Josh, I passed the entire holidays organizing stuff and moving furniture around, so I didn't even have time to catch up on messages until now ^^;

Anyway, given the movie that was being used I knew I wouldn't be able to do much, but I'm also happy about two things...first, I got a very cuddly tiggy girl friend X3 she may be super affectionate, but she's nice! and that's why I like her! X3 plus I got to fry the weapons of a few soldiers with an epic attack! that's more I could ask for in a war setting, really X3 I spent the challenge plastered against a big butt, but hey, things happen! :3

another nice story Josh, really felt bad for Tag though, he seemed very excited <:3

looking forward to the new stuff ^^

Well, you're not excused. *anal vores the Pikachu and plugs his Meowth butt with a butt-plug*

You're so much fun to torture and abuse, but also to show off sometimes, since you're quite the powerful little guy. I'm glad you had fun with it. Terra is rather annoying and silly, but at least she's nice~

Yeah, I know. But, when I write something, I have to make choices logically and fairly. As much as I loved him, I couldn't keep him around. It just wasn't fair.

Thanks, Sparkles.

sorry sorry this is late since i just got my laptop today. i thought it was funny when the little mew was crushed by kendra. and the comment made about it was privceless. i rolled off my bed laughing.

It's fine; better late than never. And, I'm glad you liked that part; Kendra is so sexy and funny. Mewth makes the perfect target for abuse, too.

yes he does xD. but keep up the good work Josh, i'm working on the confessional right now. hopefully i can make it in time.

at least Chris isn't the host

Damn right.

Soooo.... how's episode 3 coming?

Not so good.

Sorry to hear that.