And this came from?

My head silly!

*points down* Prompts?

Nice one, and well done.

Its also good to see more writers are getting involved in the prompts.

Good scene, well handled. The characters are believable and the situation realistic. My only crit would be that there are a few places where the characters' emotions/reactions are told instead of shown, that aren't really necessary (for example, "At that moment, Tim understood how lucky he was and felt a little ashamed for his actions during dinner." --something that's pretty much made clear by Tim's actions and dialogue).

And, as TShaw said, always good to see new people too. >^_^<

*chuckles.... loved it... as everyone else said the conversations and characters were very vivid and well expressed... welcome!

Hugs...

V.

Thanks! It's nice for a griffin to belong somewhere

'returns hug'

Well done. I liked your story and the way it progressed. Nice little insights into the background of the chars too.

Very cute! Nice to see the all-too-expected coming from kids instead of adults for once.

Poetigress hit a good crit area, so I'll ask instead, what's with the dashes leading in the dialogue paragraphs? If you want to set the dialogue off, you might find paragraph indenting a more standard method. I just thought it was odd, and a little distracting.

Very good little piece, I liked this very much. I was totally out about what caused the little cat's odd behaviour till it was revealed, so in a way I was less wiser than his friend. But this made the reading experience very entertaining. Great short story, I liked the way you handle your characters in this and I liked their dialogue. I enjoyed reading this.