This was a descriptive essay I did for my Freshmen Honors English I class and I think it's the best I've ever written. My teacher read the rough draft to the class and i got immediate applause when she finished. I was so surprised!

http://hawkpath-tail.deviantart.com/art/Life-of-the-Forest-338862231?q=gallery%3Ahawkpath-tail&qo=1
go here^ if you don't want to download, pls. idk how to fix it cuz i'm a noob