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The pilot episode of season two of my hit reality vore series is finally here. I worked really hard on this to make it funny, fresh, and hopefully more accurate than last season's. I have put everything I learned from last season into this pilot, and I hope it shows through, since I will be using that knowledge from here on out. I won't spoil anything or ruin anything; I just want some awesome comments and I want a lot of fun to start happening again! So, come on, show me what you got!
Important Journal: Teams, Eliminations, Episodes, Confessionals
Total Drama Vore Action Edgic: Edgic
Contestants:
1. Aaron Scales [Mobian Parrot/Star Warrior] (Male)
2. Alyssia Blustripe [Skunkette] (Female)
3. Anthony Smith [Anthro Red Ant] (Male)
4. April [Horse] (Female)
5. Aurion Black [Shiny Zoroark] (Male)
6. Brandon Chan [Lucario] (Male)
7. Brittany [Rabbit] (Female)
8. Caleb [Fennec Fox] (Male)
9. Cerin Wolfe [Dragon] (Male)
10. Char [Charizard] (Male)
11. Chrissy [Alien] (Female)
12. Colza [Arctic Wolf] (Male)
13. Denco [Anthro Silver Wolf] (Male)
14. Elise Dera [Lykachin] (Female)
15. Galen [Gardevoir] (Female)
16. Gear Grey [Grey Kitsune] (Male)
17. Gloria [Draconian] (Female)
18. Homicide [Dragon] (Male)
19. James Greenwater [Pikachu/Eevee/Vulpix/Zoura] (Male)
20. Kali Shadiya [Flygon] (Female)
21. Kara Merkuria Zastel [Panther Demi] (Female)
22. Kendra Pyrous [Wolfess] (Female)
23. Kiki [Neko] (Female)
24. Lorraine Valshire [Anthro Manadragon/Gemron] (Female)
25. Lucas [Mewtwo] (Male)
26. Marisa Pussigal [Neko] (Female)
27. Matthew Guerrero [Blaziken] (Male)
28. Mewth [Mew] (Male)
29. Mizuhiro Neko [Catwings Shapeshifter] (Male)
30. Muirne [Mouse] (Female)
31. Myuu Mitsu [Minccino] (Male)
32. Nate [Eevee/Charizard Shapeshifter] (Male)
33. Nite Tailleur [Dragon Shapeshifter] (Male)
34. Nyterious Nytedodger Daligdig [Blue Arctic Fox] (Male)
35. Richter [Rat] (Male)
36. Ricky Raccoon [Raccoon] (Male)
37. Ryan Murphy [Kangaroo] (Male)
38. Sagi [Mewtwo] (Male)
39. Seolfyr Plateado Argyros [Houndoom] (Male)
40. Sicha Tanner [Skunkette] (Female)
41. Silenrea Anon [Latias] (Female)
42. SilverFang Summerwind [Wolfilisk] (Male)
43. Soline [Pantheress] (Female)
44. Sparkster Lightpath [Pikachu] (Male)
45. Spencer Macrowolf [Wolf] (Male)
46. Tag [Mobian Mosquito] (Male)
47. Taijey H. Okale [Anthro Feline] (Female)
48. Terra [Half-Tigress] (Female)
49. Volsar Rewtree [Abra] (Male)
50. Wolf-9 [Genetically Altered Wolf] (Male)
51. Yoshi Blueblood [Luxray/Shaymin] (Female)
52. Zane [Toon Hedgehog] (Male)
Host:
Josh (Meowth) [Male]
Assistants:
DJ (Meowth) [Male]
Grey (Hyena-Wolf) [Male]
Lead Camera Girl:
Twilight Sparkle (Pony) [Female]
Punishment Girl:
Frost (Cat) [Female]
Important Journal: Teams, Eliminations, Episodes, Confessionals
Total Drama Vore Action Edgic: Edgic
Contestants:
1. Aaron Scales [Mobian Parrot/Star Warrior] (Male)
2. Alyssia Blustripe [Skunkette] (Female)
3. Anthony Smith [Anthro Red Ant] (Male)
4. April [Horse] (Female)
5. Aurion Black [Shiny Zoroark] (Male)
6. Brandon Chan [Lucario] (Male)
7. Brittany [Rabbit] (Female)
8. Caleb [Fennec Fox] (Male)
9. Cerin Wolfe [Dragon] (Male)
10. Char [Charizard] (Male)
11. Chrissy [Alien] (Female)
12. Colza [Arctic Wolf] (Male)
13. Denco [Anthro Silver Wolf] (Male)
14. Elise Dera [Lykachin] (Female)
15. Galen [Gardevoir] (Female)
16. Gear Grey [Grey Kitsune] (Male)
17. Gloria [Draconian] (Female)
18. Homicide [Dragon] (Male)
19. James Greenwater [Pikachu/Eevee/Vulpix/Zoura] (Male)
20. Kali Shadiya [Flygon] (Female)
21. Kara Merkuria Zastel [Panther Demi] (Female)
22. Kendra Pyrous [Wolfess] (Female)
23. Kiki [Neko] (Female)
24. Lorraine Valshire [Anthro Manadragon/Gemron] (Female)
25. Lucas [Mewtwo] (Male)
26. Marisa Pussigal [Neko] (Female)
27. Matthew Guerrero [Blaziken] (Male)
28. Mewth [Mew] (Male)
29. Mizuhiro Neko [Catwings Shapeshifter] (Male)
30. Muirne [Mouse] (Female)
31. Myuu Mitsu [Minccino] (Male)
32. Nate [Eevee/Charizard Shapeshifter] (Male)
33. Nite Tailleur [Dragon Shapeshifter] (Male)
34. Nyterious Nytedodger Daligdig [Blue Arctic Fox] (Male)
35. Richter [Rat] (Male)
36. Ricky Raccoon [Raccoon] (Male)
37. Ryan Murphy [Kangaroo] (Male)
38. Sagi [Mewtwo] (Male)
39. Seolfyr Plateado Argyros [Houndoom] (Male)
40. Sicha Tanner [Skunkette] (Female)
41. Silenrea Anon [Latias] (Female)
42. SilverFang Summerwind [Wolfilisk] (Male)
43. Soline [Pantheress] (Female)
44. Sparkster Lightpath [Pikachu] (Male)
45. Spencer Macrowolf [Wolf] (Male)
46. Tag [Mobian Mosquito] (Male)
47. Taijey H. Okale [Anthro Feline] (Female)
48. Terra [Half-Tigress] (Female)
49. Volsar Rewtree [Abra] (Male)
50. Wolf-9 [Genetically Altered Wolf] (Male)
51. Yoshi Blueblood [Luxray/Shaymin] (Female)
52. Zane [Toon Hedgehog] (Male)
Host:
Josh (Meowth) [Male]
Assistants:
DJ (Meowth) [Male]
Grey (Hyena-Wolf) [Male]
Lead Camera Girl:
Twilight Sparkle (Pony) [Female]
Punishment Girl:
Frost (Cat) [Female]
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Yep, and they're all blended together (hopefully) perfectly. That's what I was aiming for.
Well, I tried to make everything as accurate as possible this time, since last season I had to deal with a LOT of people whining to me about how I was inaccurately writing them. So, I just hope I did most everyone justice. So far.
Well, I tried to make everything as accurate as possible this time, since last season I had to deal with a LOT of people whining to me about how I was inaccurately writing them. So, I just hope I did most everyone justice. So far.
Remember when I said 'bring it on.' That was before I realized how crazy everyone else is
But YAY Season 2 will be awesome! I'm already allied with Silenrea, so that means me happy ^^
Poor Sakato...I wonder if he's not gonna let go of this, and cling onto the set like Ezekiel, but we'll have to see
But YAY Season 2 will be awesome! I'm already allied with Silenrea, so that means me happy ^^
Poor Sakato...I wonder if he's not gonna let go of this, and cling onto the set like Ezekiel, but we'll have to see
If you're seriously shocked at just how crazy everyone is, then you must've been living under a rock until the moment you started to read this.
It just came to me to have that happen. You're both aura users, and your personalities really go together (in my eyes). You are an eccentric, excitable, playful Lucario (half-legendary), and Silenrea is a calm, gentle, playful Latias (legendary). It seemed like a good match. I don't know what Silenrea thinks, but I felt happy writing that part.
Eh, that's what he gets. I specifically told him that I was sorry but I had 52 players again (thanks to Colza), and yet that goofball went and made an application ANYWAY! So, he had to be punished for that. At least he got a cameo out of it.
It just came to me to have that happen. You're both aura users, and your personalities really go together (in my eyes). You are an eccentric, excitable, playful Lucario (half-legendary), and Silenrea is a calm, gentle, playful Latias (legendary). It seemed like a good match. I don't know what Silenrea thinks, but I felt happy writing that part.
Eh, that's what he gets. I specifically told him that I was sorry but I had 52 players again (thanks to Colza), and yet that goofball went and made an application ANYWAY! So, he had to be punished for that. At least he got a cameo out of it.
I mean, I knew they were nuts, but even I was a little shocked, but that makes for more fun I guess ^^
It's also funny, considering Lucas "hates" us both. But it was cool allying myself with a veteran before game (even though she was a quitter.) I think she's sweet.
He had his chance, and he blew it, but maybe we could be a cling on, it'd be a funny development
It's also funny, considering Lucas "hates" us both. But it was cool allying myself with a veteran before game (even though she was a quitter.) I think she's sweet.
He had his chance, and he blew it, but maybe we could be a cling on, it'd be a funny development
That's more like it~
Indeed. Lucas' own personal vendetta goes back a long ways with Silenrea, and his own annoyance with Lucario being in Brawl over Mewtwo makes it for a very interesting season. Lucas isn't a bad person; he just really loves his species to the point of going to ridiculous and scary lengths to prove it. I just hope that you have fun; Silenrea, whenever she decides to read this, hopefully will agree with you that you're awesome.
Yep. That's what Sakato gets. Too bad. If he comes back, Muirne will introduce him to her mouse-hole instead of her catapult, so he'd best stay away.
Indeed. Lucas' own personal vendetta goes back a long ways with Silenrea, and his own annoyance with Lucario being in Brawl over Mewtwo makes it for a very interesting season. Lucas isn't a bad person; he just really loves his species to the point of going to ridiculous and scary lengths to prove it. I just hope that you have fun; Silenrea, whenever she decides to read this, hopefully will agree with you that you're awesome.
Yep. That's what Sakato gets. Too bad. If he comes back, Muirne will introduce him to her mouse-hole instead of her catapult, so he'd best stay away.
Lucarios are typically faster than Mewtwos. At least in my opinion and knowledge. Don't take it too hard. Brandon is always running around excitedly anyway; I'm not sure if he EVER stops running. I think he has some Pinkie Pie in him. That or he just loves sugar and is always hyper.
http://veekun.com/dex/gadgets/compare_pokemon?pokemon=Mewtwo&pokemon=Lucario
Mewtwo has Lucario outsped by 40 base stat points. Lucario has access to Extremespeed but that's only an 80 base power move that won't give him any same-type attack bonus or supereffective hits.
Mewtwo has Lucario outsped by 40 base stat points. Lucario has access to Extremespeed but that's only an 80 base power move that won't give him any same-type attack bonus or supereffective hits.
Yeah, I saw that coming. He blocks ANYONE who he believes hates Mewtwos, are enemies of Mewtwos, say something that isn't nice to Mewtwos, and so on and so forth. So, the fact that you're a Lucario...well, don't take it personally. He's simply pissed at how Lucario is in that Brawl game and Mewtwo isn't. It's just his way of accepting things and stuff.
You captured me quite well. Nice work on the intros and the pilot as a whole! Admittedly, this is the first time I read through a whole piece, start to finish, without skimming a single bit of it, and that'll have to be the norm now! No more "Ctrl+F"ing for Sagi or Mewtwo this time around!
Going to get a quick confessional up now, combining what I meant to do before and what I need to do now. (That and get my FA blocks up, since the season's officially started!)
Going to get a quick confessional up now, combining what I meant to do before and what I need to do now. (That and get my FA blocks up, since the season's officially started!)
I'm very happy to hear that. Thanks very much, too; I did the best I could, and I'm honestly very proud of how it turned out. And it's about time you started reading it the entire way through! Bad Mewtwo.
Well, good luck to you on both fronts. Prepare for more to come soon.
Well, good luck to you on both fronts. Prepare for more to come soon.
Not me. I didn't buy it; I got a friend to download it and then I installed it onto my computer. But, I'm afraid I don't know what else to tell you. I can't write the story on anything else. So...well, I sent it to you in a note. It's a big hassle to do it that way, and you don't get everything out of it otherwise, but...I'm sorry. Don't know what to tell ya.
You're welcome. A hassle or not, you are a contestant, so it's only fair. I can't technically blame you for having a crappy computer and stuff. Not everyone has it easy. Including myself. So, I can understand. Oh, and...sorry, but I'm NOT posting it in the author's notes. As you can tell, I use that room for many other things, and it's already big enough. Plus, with the wonderful comments I get...well, it would just be to big. I like to keep things neat and tidy. I'm a perfectionist, you know.
Again, you don't NEED to do confessionals; it's not like I'm asking anyone to actually DO them. It's just a really nice, fun, and creative thing to do to help with the story and to have fun with other people. I mean, may as well make the most if it, right? Either way, I can't wait to see.
Again, you don't NEED to do confessionals; it's not like I'm asking anyone to actually DO them. It's just a really nice, fun, and creative thing to do to help with the story and to have fun with other people. I mean, may as well make the most if it, right? Either way, I can't wait to see.
Well I feel it's only fair, since you'll probably be sending me your stories more than once. Also I feel I need to let this be known. Anthony is my pet, as it says on my page. You think you could fit in a bit of interaction between us? Its up to you but I wasn't aware he was in this too until I read this.
Yes, I know. I'm awesome. That's all there is to it. Tell me something I DON'T know. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and yes, there will be a lot of torture for all those rotten victims/contestants once I get through with their asses! They think they can walk all over me? Well, they'll see the error of their ways soon enough.
*shrieks and thrashes like crazy as he was brought around behind the dragoness and introduced for the first time to her big, deadly rear-end* N-N-NO! Y-YOU CAN'T DO THIS! I-IT'LL SMELL IN THERE! NOOOOO! *his screams die down and become muffled as he's crammed deep between those cheeks and up that butt crack* Mmmmmph...
*the entire time spent inside Gloria's powerful, tight ass, the Meowth moans and groans, whines and whimpers, struggles and flails as best as he can. Finally, as he's tugged out, he gasps for air and weakly looks at Gloria* L-learned my lesson? On w-what? I can't help being cute!
Gloria: *A sudden thought and grins,* On second thought, I might do have some room for you. *She then moves him behind her and raised her tail, than shoves him, pushing him between and against your body till you both are stuck together in a tight spot in there. She lowers her tail and grins. Knowing one thing, if he shocks her, he shocks you.*
*easy to say, with both Meowth boys horribly squashed flat and smushed deep within Gloria's powerful ass, both of them were strongly reconsidering having upset the powerful dragoness. Both boys moaned, twitched, trembled, whimpered, and tried to wiggle back out from their butt crack prison, but it was a no-go*
Gloria: *Grins and enjoys her day, as it goes, about two hours later, she remembered you. So she raised her tail and reaches. She remembered that she stuffed DJ with you. So she reaches for the one that remained in there the longest, and pulled you by the tail. She then holds you in front of her,* You learned your lesson yet?
Yep...sigh, and once again everyone hates me for no goddamned reason -.- You'ld think I'd learn to take this shit with a grain of salt by now, but It's really starting to get to me how disliked I am >.> even if it is just a construct of your demented little kitty brain and I'm blowing it out of proportion
Well, that happens. As I said, you have so many freaking powers and can hardly EVER do anything wrong, so you're like that talented and powerful jock at the high school that everyone can't stand BECAUSE he's so awesome. So, in this case, just take the hatred as a good thing. There's hatred for someone like Nocturne, and then hatred for you. Can you tell the difference? One level of hatred is due to the target being a pure jerk and is downright evil and really vile. The other hatred is due to the target being just too talented.
GAH!! Its friggin long...!!! *dramatic gasp* How long does it usually take to write something like this? I mean... Ive never really paid all that much attention into story details, but this one is so friggin long that I kinda felt that I totally should concentrate more than usual today!!
So uh...! Your writing is pretty excellent! Im not a native english speaker...or....writer...or reader.... But Im still quite confident in my capabilities with english. It was...what....36 pages long? And I spotted under 10 typos.... Which is pretty friggin well done!!
So uh...lets get a lil more indepth! The gathering of characters was very funny! XD Though also a tad bit cliche. They always gather like that for tournaments and the like. But I dont think being cliche can be counted as a fault when you were intentionally aiming to be funny. SO the cliche...ness mightave been intentional.
The char descriptions were so much fun! Even though I had a lil trouble following some of em, due to the listing of tons of chars unknown to me. But I bet ill get more familiar with em as the story proceeds!! X3
Now then HAAAAARLEEEEEY DAVIDDDDSOONNN!!!! X3 Aka. the comments bout how you write Terra!
XD I have held story writing contests in the past, some writers did stories about Terra, but this one was definitely the most accurate description of her behavior so far! Even though the stypidity was taken a bit overboard, it was still good! X3 But just a friendly reminder. Shes not....an utter dumbass. Shes just... very ignorant. X3 But she still knows the basics of life, like...''which way i should sit on a motorcycle''
Though... If you think its more fun to have a sexy dumbass aboard! Im more than happy to read more of Terras utterly idiotic misadventures! The choice is yours.
Aaaand... Uh... Thats about it for now!! Im looking eagerly forwards to the first part of the actual story!!...And sorry bout running over you...with the....*ahem* Stolen...motorcycle....
So uh...! Your writing is pretty excellent! Im not a native english speaker...or....writer...or reader.... But Im still quite confident in my capabilities with english. It was...what....36 pages long? And I spotted under 10 typos.... Which is pretty friggin well done!!
So uh...lets get a lil more indepth! The gathering of characters was very funny! XD Though also a tad bit cliche. They always gather like that for tournaments and the like. But I dont think being cliche can be counted as a fault when you were intentionally aiming to be funny. SO the cliche...ness mightave been intentional.
The char descriptions were so much fun! Even though I had a lil trouble following some of em, due to the listing of tons of chars unknown to me. But I bet ill get more familiar with em as the story proceeds!! X3
Now then HAAAAARLEEEEEY DAVIDDDDSOONNN!!!! X3 Aka. the comments bout how you write Terra!
XD I have held story writing contests in the past, some writers did stories about Terra, but this one was definitely the most accurate description of her behavior so far! Even though the stypidity was taken a bit overboard, it was still good! X3 But just a friendly reminder. Shes not....an utter dumbass. Shes just... very ignorant. X3 But she still knows the basics of life, like...''which way i should sit on a motorcycle''
Though... If you think its more fun to have a sexy dumbass aboard! Im more than happy to read more of Terras utterly idiotic misadventures! The choice is yours.
Aaaand... Uh... Thats about it for now!! Im looking eagerly forwards to the first part of the actual story!!...And sorry bout running over you...with the....*ahem* Stolen...motorcycle....
Of course it's long, sweetie. I can't write something like this in only a few pages. I'd be a terrible and disgraceful writer if I were to do THAT. And, it all depends on how distracted I get or how dedicated and creative I feel. The pilot took me about...four days to write?
It's good to know that, for the most part, I made Terra a funny character that closest to being accurate out of everyone who HAS written her. I'll try to take what you said and improve even more in the next episode.
I'm glad that you enjoyed it, sweetie. I worked hard to make it funny and accurate, and the length happened that way by default. When you want to make something perfect or simply REALLY good, it usually takes time and a lot of words. Still, thank you for reading and for your long comment! I like them when they're long; those who leave tiny comments just make me mad. So, thanks very much!
It's good to know that, for the most part, I made Terra a funny character that closest to being accurate out of everyone who HAS written her. I'll try to take what you said and improve even more in the next episode.
I'm glad that you enjoyed it, sweetie. I worked hard to make it funny and accurate, and the length happened that way by default. When you want to make something perfect or simply REALLY good, it usually takes time and a lot of words. Still, thank you for reading and for your long comment! I like them when they're long; those who leave tiny comments just make me mad. So, thanks very much!
I can't believe it's here! Finally, time for a new chapter to start!
*Grins evily* I will make sure Aaron knows he has some healthy competition in me, that's for sure! Trying a bear hug contest with a former WPW champ? NOT a good idea ;3 but don't worry...i'll go easy...once...
You really got my joking side down pat, josh! A very nice and epic start to season 2!
I like all of the introductions to each of the contestants, letting everyone see the personalities and emotions of everyone is spectacular for others to contemplate how things will play out...which is especially good for me!
*hugs tight* Can't wait to see the reactions of the cast when teams are formed!
*Grins evily* I will make sure Aaron knows he has some healthy competition in me, that's for sure! Trying a bear hug contest with a former WPW champ? NOT a good idea ;3 but don't worry...i'll go easy...once...
You really got my joking side down pat, josh! A very nice and epic start to season 2!
I like all of the introductions to each of the contestants, letting everyone see the personalities and emotions of everyone is spectacular for others to contemplate how things will play out...which is especially good for me!
*hugs tight* Can't wait to see the reactions of the cast when teams are formed!
Got that right, Matthew.
Yeah...poor Aaron. Physical strength is not one of his strong suits, at least not when compared to YOU, Mattie.
Got my new joker alright, and it's awesome.
Yeah, all the introductions were a lot of fun to write, since I wanted each one different or unique in their own ways.
*hugs back* Stay tuned, Mattie.
Yeah...poor Aaron. Physical strength is not one of his strong suits, at least not when compared to YOU, Mattie.
Got my new joker alright, and it's awesome.
Yeah, all the introductions were a lot of fun to write, since I wanted each one different or unique in their own ways.
*hugs back* Stay tuned, Mattie.
You're as skinny as a beanpole, as far as your avatar shows. So, as far as I can see, you're not that strong. Besides, it only makes sense. You can't do EVERYTHING. You already have enough freaking powers that allows you to god-mod almost as well as Silenrea. You can use electricity, you can now fly, you can make portals, you can apparently make meat puppets, you can cook very well...seriously, you HAVE to have a weakness. So enough out of you, before I have Matthew eat you.
Eh, I'm pretty sure he'd eat me either way. I don't make the meat puppets, My cousin Adam does...he just programmed them so I can sorta control them. And I have plenty of weaknesses. Rubber, sand, lightningrods, spikes *shudders* and while I'm fairly agile, I'm not really all that fast (Hence why I'm a power type like knuckles and not a speed type like Sonic). Without my terraboard, i can't even clear a loop without falling on my ass.
Wonderful intro! Just out of interest I went back and looked at the pilot episode of TDVT again and... well, you can see how much you've improved! Really great little intros for each character, they all get showcased quite nicely! All the familiar faces are great, and the newbies seem like they'll be a lot of fun too.
I enjoyed Muirne's intro segment (no surprises there!) That Magical Transportation Device really did get them to the right place, and fast, so all that criticism from Ricky seems quite unfair. Maybe this will help people learn how very trustworthy she is, and that they should do everything she tells them to without question
I enjoyed Muirne's intro segment (no surprises there!) That Magical Transportation Device really did get them to the right place, and fast, so all that criticism from Ricky seems quite unfair. Maybe this will help people learn how very trustworthy she is, and that they should do everything she tells them to without question
Yeah, I honestly did the same thing. I went and looked back at my pilot from last season as well, and I had to give myself a pat on the back. I'm so awesome, and it feels good. I know that NOTHING is perfect, but I really do feel I did this pilot justice by putting all the characters (who deserved it) into the spotlight in their own ways.
That's Muirne for you. Random, but still in the "intelligent" way, as per her geek side. But, she is still very devious and wicked, as per her desire to harm and punish others with her rump or whatever else is around. Ironically, despite her scary and maniacal and crazy side, the fact remains that Muirne IS smart and IS right a lot of the time. She just has...a very unique way of making her point. That's why she's so awesome.
That's Muirne for you. Random, but still in the "intelligent" way, as per her geek side. But, she is still very devious and wicked, as per her desire to harm and punish others with her rump or whatever else is around. Ironically, despite her scary and maniacal and crazy side, the fact remains that Muirne IS smart and IS right a lot of the time. She just has...a very unique way of making her point. That's why she's so awesome.
As submissions, yes. But, don't lose confidence THAT quickly. Nate is even smaller than Mewth (as far as I can see), and HIS confidence isn't so hot, either. Plus, last season, Shane was stuffed inside an ass every single episode, and for a good CHUNK of those episodes! He still finished in 4th place. So, don't lose hope just yet, sillyhead~
Ha, reading never hurt anyone. We all had to do it in school, and we all turned out alright! Anyway, thanks for finding it interesting, thanks for apparently looking through all the fun comments on here, and thanks for sticking around. Gotta love ya, cute little Snivy thing~
It seems like I have a guardian Mewtwo looking after me.
I could imagine Lucas' thinking, "My Mewtwo sense is tingling, it seems Sagi is doing something stupid again."
I do hope I can make more friends this season, even make friends with rivals from the previous season.
I mean, whenever I do go out I hope it'd be on friendly terms and vice versa if I was the one eliminating someone. :3
I could imagine Lucas' thinking, "My Mewtwo sense is tingling, it seems Sagi is doing something stupid again."
I do hope I can make more friends this season, even make friends with rivals from the previous season.
I mean, whenever I do go out I hope it'd be on friendly terms and vice versa if I was the one eliminating someone. :3
Aw, Sagi, Aaron painfully stuffed you up his bunghole and HE likes you. I think. But, yeah, I'm sure a cute, likable Mewtwo like yourself shouldn't have any problem fitting in. Oh, and yeah, Lucas will be there to look out for you. His tactics are a bit extreme and somewhat odd, but to those he cares for and respects, he'd give his life for them. So, at least you have him. Oh, and Volsar, and most likely half of the other contestants by now. That's how much you rule, Sagi~
a few minutes into the show and I'm already abused of! X3 Hope Josh doesn't want to get revenge for my last shenanigan on him after the first show X3 *gigglefits* a kitsune butt is sure softer than it seems though! :3 and also loving the lil bit of glory I had by punishing Gear, as really cute! X3 Really glad to be with Aaron, Anthony and the others again! ^^ let's rock!
I'm sorry, Sparky; it just went that way. I paired people up with others that just seemed right together. So, putting you with Aaron was a no-brainer. Putting Gear there...eh, I had to introduce the dork SOMEHOW. That was just kinda random. But, yeah; having you get revenge against that silly kitsune was downright fun. Plus, he had it coming for sitting on everyone's favorite Pikachu. Even if you don't get the team you like, hopefully it'll work out and you'll have fun this season. And pay more attention to it than you did until the later half of season one.
... I'm kinda jealous that Josh is the one that got all those sexy paws all over him and not me. Also, so many faces i know that... probably don't know who the hell I even am. Yay for being a raccoon in passing. I shall use my newly acquired skills in retail to rise to the top... then lift muirne up there with me because, well, sexy mouse is sexy. *nods* Anyway, I finished it, and aside from the seething jealous of josh getting all stomped, and a strange desire to get really creative with my box cutter (literally creative of course, as opposed to the far more conventional "chop them into little bits" creative) I was rather blown away.
And it was still just a catapult, I don't care what you say Muirne!
And it was still just a catapult, I don't care what you say Muirne!
Aw, my cute little masochistic raccoon. You're so adorable, you know that? It's hard to not love a devious little raccoon like you, Ricky. I don't really know why, but putting you in an intro with Muirne just came to me. Probably because you just seem like two great rivals or foils for one another. I have no idea what you're talking about with box cutters, but I wouldn't be too jealous of poor Josh. He's in quite a bit of pain.
Watch what you say; you'll get a mouse butt on your face!
Watch what you say; you'll get a mouse butt on your face!
First, I'm glad you like the 'you' in this season! It's my job (and my new goal) to make sure that I get everyone as accurate as possible this time around. Oh, and yeah, some of the contestants this time around were in season one, but they switched characters this time around. Two of them are quite obvious. Whoever you know, I hope you like them.
Well, here it is, the begining of a brand new story. One given life with all the knowlege and hardships of it's pretisesers. And though this is only the introduction, ment to introduce those chosen to join your work, it is also the promise of things to come, and what sheds light on how this series will go. So far, I must say, it shows a promising outcome.
Poetics aside, I have to say that I've developed mixed feelings for this series, given the real life hardships in the near final chapters, and almost lost hope it would ever come. But, with the final chapter of season 1, and now this pilot, I must say I have a reinued my faith and interest, and I am happy to say I once more find myself eager to see where this seires will
And, on my darkest and most personal note. I have to admite in all honesty, I was rather terrified as to how your portial of Nine wound turn, given the laps in time in which I was an active character, the... "events" that occured between my entry application and now, and saddly, my lingering disappiontments within the finale. I was so terrified of how Nine would shift in your story, I actually contimplated asking to be released from the series if worst come to worst. However, I am elated to say my worries where shattered. Not only did you hit the nail on the head personality wise, but you even compisated for his mood. And as far as the small hints of drama you've shown, I like them. Outright humiliation for the sake of humiliation bugs me, but annoyance via other characters? I can laugh through that happily. I'm sorry I ever doubted you Josh, and am once more proud to be in your work and excited to see where you take me.
Oh, and my final words are of positive critisism. Overall, the only thing I can judge on, (this being a pilot, and as such isn't ment to be super elabrote), is simple writing mistakes. Mostly miss-used and miss-placed words, but guessing you were excited to get this finished and out for everyone, I can understand.
Poetics aside, I have to say that I've developed mixed feelings for this series, given the real life hardships in the near final chapters, and almost lost hope it would ever come. But, with the final chapter of season 1, and now this pilot, I must say I have a reinued my faith and interest, and I am happy to say I once more find myself eager to see where this seires will
And, on my darkest and most personal note. I have to admite in all honesty, I was rather terrified as to how your portial of Nine wound turn, given the laps in time in which I was an active character, the... "events" that occured between my entry application and now, and saddly, my lingering disappiontments within the finale. I was so terrified of how Nine would shift in your story, I actually contimplated asking to be released from the series if worst come to worst. However, I am elated to say my worries where shattered. Not only did you hit the nail on the head personality wise, but you even compisated for his mood. And as far as the small hints of drama you've shown, I like them. Outright humiliation for the sake of humiliation bugs me, but annoyance via other characters? I can laugh through that happily. I'm sorry I ever doubted you Josh, and am once more proud to be in your work and excited to see where you take me.
Oh, and my final words are of positive critisism. Overall, the only thing I can judge on, (this being a pilot, and as such isn't ment to be super elabrote), is simple writing mistakes. Mostly miss-used and miss-placed words, but guessing you were excited to get this finished and out for everyone, I can understand.
Quite poetic, my dark wolf. You always surprise me.
I'm not exactly sure what you meant by that, but then again, you're a very complex and emotional person. So, all I can say is that I'm glad that I renewed your desire to find out where this goes. I didn't invite you back for nothing. It wasn't because I crave "high ratings" or anything; I invited you back because I love you a lot and you are so very unique and there's a lot more to you that I don't think anyone will ever fully understand. It's so mystifying.
Just wait until you see what I have in mind for Wolf-9 in episode one. You won't see it coming. Nor will anyone else, for that matter. It's going to be a game-changer very early on. I simply could not think of anyone else to pull it off except him. So, just you wait and see! I'm just happy that I'm making YOU happy. That's all I aim for; I don't WANT making anyone miserable or unhappy. Sure, I humiliate Ricky, Zane, and even myself a lot! But, that's only because it's funny and none of them really mind; I don't do it to be sadistic or rude.
Hm, really? It's weird that I never see those, since when I type, I never really see mistakes. If I make one, I quickly correct it. I guess it's just because I'm the writer and being a reader is a lot different. I don't know. But, still, thanks!
I'm not exactly sure what you meant by that, but then again, you're a very complex and emotional person. So, all I can say is that I'm glad that I renewed your desire to find out where this goes. I didn't invite you back for nothing. It wasn't because I crave "high ratings" or anything; I invited you back because I love you a lot and you are so very unique and there's a lot more to you that I don't think anyone will ever fully understand. It's so mystifying.
Just wait until you see what I have in mind for Wolf-9 in episode one. You won't see it coming. Nor will anyone else, for that matter. It's going to be a game-changer very early on. I simply could not think of anyone else to pull it off except him. So, just you wait and see! I'm just happy that I'm making YOU happy. That's all I aim for; I don't WANT making anyone miserable or unhappy. Sure, I humiliate Ricky, Zane, and even myself a lot! But, that's only because it's funny and none of them really mind; I don't do it to be sadistic or rude.
Hm, really? It's weird that I never see those, since when I type, I never really see mistakes. If I make one, I quickly correct it. I guess it's just because I'm the writer and being a reader is a lot different. I don't know. But, still, thanks!
Hey, I ment it when I said your the novalist, I'm the poet. You just should have seen me in my hay-day.
I know you didn't invite me for ratings. Hell, theres a dozen or more how are more enticing or funny then me. And there is a lot more to me then anyone will know. Hell, I'm still trying to figure myself out. But I'm glad to see thats something you like about me
I know how you feel cause I'm the same way. But I often find myself looking through my writings and finding little mistakes here and there. Its because as a writer, your thinking about whats to come, but a reader looks at what is there. And your welcome
I know you didn't invite me for ratings. Hell, theres a dozen or more how are more enticing or funny then me. And there is a lot more to me then anyone will know. Hell, I'm still trying to figure myself out. But I'm glad to see thats something you like about me
I know how you feel cause I'm the same way. But I often find myself looking through my writings and finding little mistakes here and there. Its because as a writer, your thinking about whats to come, but a reader looks at what is there. And your welcome
Haha, Pay for that? Oh boy, am I going to have to do grunt work? I dont handle that well..
Haha, sorry.. sometimes I forget FA exists..
I really like how you're portraying Elise so far :) (I just read her introduction. also loving how your using continuity from our RP :) Thanks a bunch! That was a lot of fun..) I also like how shes being introduced with characters of my friends, and (other than Kiki) Characters shes met before :)
Haha, sorry.. sometimes I forget FA exists..
I really like how you're portraying Elise so far :) (I just read her introduction. also loving how your using continuity from our RP :) Thanks a bunch! That was a lot of fun..) I also like how shes being introduced with characters of my friends, and (other than Kiki) Characters shes met before :)
*pats on the head* I know you're not meant for work; I was just saying you'll pay anyway.
I was hoping you'd like Elise. Yeah, I took a lot of her out of our role-play, and tried to make it fit in. It's REALLY hard giving fair airtime and parts for 52 players, you know. And, yeah, I had a suspicion that you knew Marisa and Chrissy, so it seemed right to put them together. Kiki...well, she's basically a lot like them, so putting her with them was fun, too.
I was hoping you'd like Elise. Yeah, I took a lot of her out of our role-play, and tried to make it fit in. It's REALLY hard giving fair airtime and parts for 52 players, you know. And, yeah, I had a suspicion that you knew Marisa and Chrissy, so it seemed right to put them together. Kiki...well, she's basically a lot like them, so putting her with them was fun, too.
So, I have a few things I'd like to say-
Don't be afraid to show off Elise's kinky side too soon- she should be able to warm up to the situation pretty quickly.. especially considering she'll be around friends.. haha.. and, even if embarrased by it, Elise is never one to complain about sexy girl gas.. (though, gas from a guy is completely disgusting to her.) And.. given Elise's experiance with Josh, she's likely to flirt with him to get what she wants. ;)
Don't be afraid to show off Elise's kinky side too soon- she should be able to warm up to the situation pretty quickly.. especially considering she'll be around friends.. haha.. and, even if embarrased by it, Elise is never one to complain about sexy girl gas.. (though, gas from a guy is completely disgusting to her.) And.. given Elise's experiance with Josh, she's likely to flirt with him to get what she wants. ;)
Okay, got it. I was simply going off our role-play and how you were saying how Elise would be a bit paranoid and distant and shy during the first few episodes. At least until she farts or something like that. But, okay, I'll remember that. And, with Josh...same thing applies to you, should you make any confessionals.
If you want to see some good examples of some confessionals, go check out the journal listed in the author's notes. All the confessionals are there, as I showcase them for everyone who writes one.
If you want to see some good examples of some confessionals, go check out the journal listed in the author's notes. All the confessionals are there, as I showcase them for everyone who writes one.
Okay...I've got to laugh. Looks like I've got YET ANOTHER tie-in outside of TDVA.
Muirne, who I'm a little wary of given the incident with Sagi and the catapult, happens to be Roco's opponent in Stank's Vorish Survivor Tournament...and I've been bankrolling Roco's otter character, Rotto, with the buy-in votes throughout his rounds thus far because I owe him a favor for something he's working on for me.
I knew this series was going to spill over into real life - I just didn't anticipate it happening so quickly!
Muirne, who I'm a little wary of given the incident with Sagi and the catapult, happens to be Roco's opponent in Stank's Vorish Survivor Tournament...and I've been bankrolling Roco's otter character, Rotto, with the buy-in votes throughout his rounds thus far because I owe him a favor for something he's working on for me.
I knew this series was going to spill over into real life - I just didn't anticipate it happening so quickly!
Uh...well, how about that? I REALLY wish you wouldn't hate Muirne, though; she's a very funny and awesome girl. She was simply playing with Sagi and wasn't REALLY trying to hurt him. But...er, well, think and do what you like. I'm just glad that you're apparently becoming even more involved with random and interesting side events. Very weird how this stuff happens, eh?
Glad to see you finally commented! I couldn't wait to see you. I was really hoping you could be my new Shane. Don't ask what that means. Either way, I'm really glad you liked it.
And, if you really do one, I'll be right there to read it and add it to the journal and thank you profusely for it.
And, if you really do one, I'll be right there to read it and add it to the journal and thank you profusely for it.
Done, http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9296572/ I don't yet know how to make it link so if it dosen't sorry.
Sorry it took me so long to comment I was kinda starstruck by meeting Soline.
Sorry it took me so long to comment I was kinda starstruck by meeting Soline.
Don't get used to it. Soline isn't paying any attention to the series, and didn't comment on that journal, so...chances are she won't be around for that long. Yes, she's hot and nice stuff, but...that was last season. Either way, I'm glad you're happy, and I'll be looking at that confessional ASAP!
Well, thank you very much for your very nice comment! That always fills me with glee to see others who aren't even involved find it enjoyable! I love that. And, yeah, I'm sorry I can't let anymore in this season. But, there WILL be a season three, so if you watch me and decide to stick around, maybe you can sign up for next season.
It's possible Although I might have trouble deciding between her and Jake. Jake is my main OC that I use for almost everything (Though I still have to make a furry version of him) and Hilary is more of a side character, though I realize that everyone probably likes Hilary better I haven't really got the chance to flesh out any characters... Jake just seems like an awkward, unlucky, nice guy, and Hilary is just your average sadistic hippo.
Well I only guessed Hillary because she's the only anthro OC of yours that I'm aware of, I would have said Jake had he an anthro form of his own. Yeah, fleshing them out would help, more people probably appear to like Hillary because she's a squasher though, Jake is likeable and I enjoy watching his unlucky situations occur.
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