So. As I was out today, I realized...I haven't RPed in ages. I would really like to. But I am sure I am out of practice. So. While I was doing the secretary thing for mom and doing her scheduling and what not...I decided to see if I had any talent in 'writing' or 'rping' at all anymore.
So...I did a few paragraphs that I would like to share.
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Her breath came in short gasps. Darn heavy body, she really needed to lose weight. Lightening flashed, showing a brief glimpse of the path she took. It pushed the darkness back and was instantly over taken again. The skies wept and the earth shook with rage. Her leather booted feet pitter-pattered against the cement ground ' I have to get away!' was the only coherent thought she had as she raced through the black slums of the city. Her clothing was a second skin, so completely drenched. A shiny arm bangle was the only protection she had against the elements. It was glistening malevolently. She was a gazelle, not even the wind could catch her or match her grace. 'Oh gods...cramp!' She fell, sliding as though she hit a home run. Blood flowed from her chin, fingers, elbows, and knees. But she was up, still going, ankle swelling. She could feel the sinister flow of harsh smoke slowly catching up..choking her breath away. It was playing with her like a tiger and it's prey. She rounded a corner, staggering, she pushed hair from her face only to find that she successfully managed to trap herself. A dead end. 'Darn humans and their roads to nowhere!' she frantically looked around, but for what...she wasn't sure. And then...it appeared before her...
Elixer stood tall and proud as the ground shook with each step the creation made. The mechanical entity was huge, to say the least.
'And this is what I get for trying to pillage from an area like this...' her inner voice snidely chastised.
Shaking it off, she decided not to let her brain go into detail. Instead, she weakly stanced, preparing for another face to face with the metallic beast before her. The mecha stood well over 9 feet and after scanning the area, and spotting her, let out a horrible rusted titter of amusement. Eli knew this was a bad idea for herself. She had sensed the oncoming weather, knew these mechanical ruins was bad news. And yet, she still allowed her own greed to guide her. A quick stop, just to rummage through and see if she could find anything worth while. Or at least something good enough to sell to feed her. She had not had a decent meal in several days now.
And her stomach gurgled loudly to remind her, sapping even more of her strength. How unfortunate that she had stumbled upon this stupid creation and awoken a very rude, and wicked creature.
"Give back what you stole!" it bellowed at her, warming up a very dangerous looking laser.
"Heh. Make me." and she rushed it. 'This won't end well...' was the last coherent thing her brain railed at her. Her mind was her only friend.
Time seemed to stand still for her, but reality came back quick when a streak of lightening lit up the world for a brief moment. And she saw the beast bots giant hand coming down towards her. With a yelp, she jumped out the way just as the beefy fist crashed into the ground right by her. Eli rolled as the bot struggled to pull its rusting, yet amazingly strong, fist from the ground. Eli then took off, no hesitation at the chance to put more distance between her and it.
'This is insane! You know it won't take long for it to track you back down! What are we going to do?!'
"You are not helping!!!" She cried out to no one as she huffed and turned a corner, nearly falling as she slid. "Your supposed to be my brain! Come up with something!!!"
'Don't yell at me!!'
Eli's ears pinned back as she heard the coming pounding of giant footsteps. She knew she couldn't hide, and it was much faster than she was. Her magic ability only held one good shot, lack of eating weakened her. Not enough time to come up with anything, it rounded the corner and instantly saw her. She shivered from cold and slowly stanced again.
"If I am to die here....so be it..."
The bot charged at her, Eli leapt up, to jump over it's head. However, the bot detected her actions and grabbed her leg. She yelped, crying out in shock. 'It's too fast..!' She felt herself being slammed back down to the ground. She hit the earth and heard a loud crack. Coughing up blood, she held her hand up and cried "PHANTOM BLADE!" but the usual beam of light that brightened the skies flickered and died. Eli felt herself being lifted into the air again and then brought back down with amazing speed. More pain echoed through her body.
..And then..darkness.
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So while I was reading though it just now...I decided to put a sketch to it. 'The fighter' by Gym Class Heroes came on and inspired me a bit.
I tried to capture the scene of Elixer standing there staring up at the bot in the rain. However..I didn't get the 'wet' effect down. I loved the sketch though so I tried to ink it. Messed up on the ink and eventually gave up. This picture is the product of it anyway.
Yes. Eli is overweight and has huge hips.
I suppose this could be the start of a nice rp, huh? I don't thhink I would mind at all ^//^
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So...I did a few paragraphs that I would like to share.
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Her breath came in short gasps. Darn heavy body, she really needed to lose weight. Lightening flashed, showing a brief glimpse of the path she took. It pushed the darkness back and was instantly over taken again. The skies wept and the earth shook with rage. Her leather booted feet pitter-pattered against the cement ground ' I have to get away!' was the only coherent thought she had as she raced through the black slums of the city. Her clothing was a second skin, so completely drenched. A shiny arm bangle was the only protection she had against the elements. It was glistening malevolently. She was a gazelle, not even the wind could catch her or match her grace. 'Oh gods...cramp!' She fell, sliding as though she hit a home run. Blood flowed from her chin, fingers, elbows, and knees. But she was up, still going, ankle swelling. She could feel the sinister flow of harsh smoke slowly catching up..choking her breath away. It was playing with her like a tiger and it's prey. She rounded a corner, staggering, she pushed hair from her face only to find that she successfully managed to trap herself. A dead end. 'Darn humans and their roads to nowhere!' she frantically looked around, but for what...she wasn't sure. And then...it appeared before her...
Elixer stood tall and proud as the ground shook with each step the creation made. The mechanical entity was huge, to say the least.
'And this is what I get for trying to pillage from an area like this...' her inner voice snidely chastised.
Shaking it off, she decided not to let her brain go into detail. Instead, she weakly stanced, preparing for another face to face with the metallic beast before her. The mecha stood well over 9 feet and after scanning the area, and spotting her, let out a horrible rusted titter of amusement. Eli knew this was a bad idea for herself. She had sensed the oncoming weather, knew these mechanical ruins was bad news. And yet, she still allowed her own greed to guide her. A quick stop, just to rummage through and see if she could find anything worth while. Or at least something good enough to sell to feed her. She had not had a decent meal in several days now.
And her stomach gurgled loudly to remind her, sapping even more of her strength. How unfortunate that she had stumbled upon this stupid creation and awoken a very rude, and wicked creature.
"Give back what you stole!" it bellowed at her, warming up a very dangerous looking laser.
"Heh. Make me." and she rushed it. 'This won't end well...' was the last coherent thing her brain railed at her. Her mind was her only friend.
Time seemed to stand still for her, but reality came back quick when a streak of lightening lit up the world for a brief moment. And she saw the beast bots giant hand coming down towards her. With a yelp, she jumped out the way just as the beefy fist crashed into the ground right by her. Eli rolled as the bot struggled to pull its rusting, yet amazingly strong, fist from the ground. Eli then took off, no hesitation at the chance to put more distance between her and it.
'This is insane! You know it won't take long for it to track you back down! What are we going to do?!'
"You are not helping!!!" She cried out to no one as she huffed and turned a corner, nearly falling as she slid. "Your supposed to be my brain! Come up with something!!!"
'Don't yell at me!!'
Eli's ears pinned back as she heard the coming pounding of giant footsteps. She knew she couldn't hide, and it was much faster than she was. Her magic ability only held one good shot, lack of eating weakened her. Not enough time to come up with anything, it rounded the corner and instantly saw her. She shivered from cold and slowly stanced again.
"If I am to die here....so be it..."
The bot charged at her, Eli leapt up, to jump over it's head. However, the bot detected her actions and grabbed her leg. She yelped, crying out in shock. 'It's too fast..!' She felt herself being slammed back down to the ground. She hit the earth and heard a loud crack. Coughing up blood, she held her hand up and cried "PHANTOM BLADE!" but the usual beam of light that brightened the skies flickered and died. Eli felt herself being lifted into the air again and then brought back down with amazing speed. More pain echoed through her body.
..And then..darkness.
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So while I was reading though it just now...I decided to put a sketch to it. 'The fighter' by Gym Class Heroes came on and inspired me a bit.
I tried to capture the scene of Elixer standing there staring up at the bot in the rain. However..I didn't get the 'wet' effect down. I loved the sketch though so I tried to ink it. Messed up on the ink and eventually gave up. This picture is the product of it anyway.
Yes. Eli is overweight and has huge hips.
I suppose this could be the start of a nice rp, huh? I don't thhink I would mind at all ^//^
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Very interesting story. You have a more eloquent writing style then my own I think... mainly because you have words here I would never think to use though I know what they mean and know what they mean. For example... this is the first time I have used the word "eloquent" to describe someones writing XD. It has been a while since I rped as well... not sure if I should comment here or make a post of my own... hmmmm. =o
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