I just started writing some poems last month and have read some to a couple people, including adults. Some gave good comments, some gave comments to help me out on further poems/short stories, and some hated them, but I don't blame them. Feel free to say what is on your mind as you read the art I write for you guys and girls, coolies?

This is one of my recent poems, from 11/12/07, and it's not the first one. I'll let ya know which is the first one I've written. Until then, please enjoy "+'s and -'s" ^^.