Ooooh! She's looking great so far, Ded! Thank you~ I know it's tricky for you as it's not quite your usual style. :3

Looking it over, I think the only thing I can really say about any changes is that I was a little disappointed the seam on her dress/hip disappeared when you did the shading, but that's probably just because you shaded with the same color you did the sketch in. :3 Still, I figured I'd just mention it... hopefully it'll be a little more visible in the final version!

Humh, well when I go to color it is still not going to be visible since it's in the dark spot of the image, I suppose I can just adjust where the light is coming from if it is something you would like ^^

Hmmmmm, that's a point I hadn't considered. I think the lighting looks pretty good as-is, so I'm reluctant to get too fussy about it.

It just came to mind because when I did my color reference, I was surprised to find out the seam stood out against the black I used for the fabric, probably because the ink I used for my lines must be darker than the black I used for the dress. But if it's in the shade, it's certainly going to be dark...

It would be kind of nice if it stood out a bit, but I really don't know how it could be done easily, so if it'd be a hassle I'd say just let it be :3

I will just have the light coming from the right so you can see the seam, not a problem at all ^^

Awww, thanks Ded! I still feel bad for being so picky. X3

Anyways, I hope things are going okay for you!