Hey, it's great to have ambititon! I've wanted to make a comic a few times before, but always lacked the follow through...
Now maybe it was lazyness, and maybe it was just my multitasking making it hard to concentrate and losing intrest, or forgetting my ideas because I didn't write them down once I had them... Either way I never got as far as this, so Congrats! Looking forward to seeing where this will go!
The last two panels are the most well done!
You might do well to add in an establishing shot, those are always usefull...
Also the yawn pose looks nice but could be better, might I suggest using more chibi style for cute/silly things like this where the character is limited in what it could express otherwise...
Great close-up of the eye, can definately see that look of just waking up!

I hope this is helpful, and good luck with the rest of the story, I will be looking forward to it!

hehehe thanks for the tips :)

I am very horrible with chibi style, I know I can make my own but my drawing style changes due to what mood im in.

Plus, this is really ment to be a "serious" comic but I may throw some funny stuff in there.