Alright. So, a little while ago I had a very vivid dream. The course of the dream was very defined, but there were some elements to it that were just a bit jumbled random stuff as well. But the overall theme of the dream I remember it clearly.
So, I decided that during my free time, I would turn this dream of mine into a romance story. This story still follows the main plot that I got from the dream, but much of this story is more refined and well-rounded than what I saw in the dream. Because, obviously in the dream I saw everything from my perspective.
But in this story, you'll be viewing the story from the eyes of my my newest character, Captain Royd Vakarlain, or just Royd if you prefer. What is Royd a captain of? You'll have to read the story to find out(I'm not going to spoil it for you here)!
But I will have you all know that there will be a lot of romance elements in this story, since as you may already know, I'm a romantic. :)
Now, this may be my best creative piece I've ever written, but I assure you that it's not the best in the world. I know that I still need a lot of practice when it comes to writing an original creative story, and I hope that any readers and writers out there can give me some critique on my story. I'd like some feedback so that I may be able to improve my writing better. Tell me what you do and don't like about the story, please! :)
Other than that, I hope you enjoy the reading! :) And I'm uploading this today as school ended early today because of Columbus Day...at least for the kids.
So, I decided that during my free time, I would turn this dream of mine into a romance story. This story still follows the main plot that I got from the dream, but much of this story is more refined and well-rounded than what I saw in the dream. Because, obviously in the dream I saw everything from my perspective.
But in this story, you'll be viewing the story from the eyes of my my newest character, Captain Royd Vakarlain, or just Royd if you prefer. What is Royd a captain of? You'll have to read the story to find out(I'm not going to spoil it for you here)!
But I will have you all know that there will be a lot of romance elements in this story, since as you may already know, I'm a romantic. :)
Now, this may be my best creative piece I've ever written, but I assure you that it's not the best in the world. I know that I still need a lot of practice when it comes to writing an original creative story, and I hope that any readers and writers out there can give me some critique on my story. I'd like some feedback so that I may be able to improve my writing better. Tell me what you do and don't like about the story, please! :)
Other than that, I hope you enjoy the reading! :) And I'm uploading this today as school ended early today because of Columbus Day...at least for the kids.
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