*gives her a hug... downloaded....

V.

I thought it was good.... perhaps you should break it into smaller chapters...

*whispers... 'most furs I met can handle only a few pages at a time before their attention span slides away'.

*hugs...

V.

I know... it was soooo long, but I thought that it might loose some momentum if I broke it up.
I have about seven chapters in the story that are at at some stage of being written, so I wasn't sure how having a prologue in chapters would work with them.

sigh...some day I'll be able to finish those chapters- they're just part of the list of uncompleted works including four stories about my fursona and a few Thursday prompts I've started but haven't finished

ohhhhhh finish the prompts! those are meant to be quick, and it gives you such a good feeling to get them out there for people to see.

as to the rest... *shrugs her shoulders... you should see my list of unfinished stuffs... one novel just stalled at page 250 or so... and it was a good one too... I'll get to it eventually.

Hugs...

V.