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My new character, Aero. Tastefully naked for the sake of his patterns.
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
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Size 771 x 717px
File Size 327.3 kB
Interesting to see this after commenting on the chibi version. Full body anatomy feedback is one of my specialties.
Feedback:
- From the angle you drew, Aero's right wing is placed a little too high. Lowering the position would balance the wings.
- Left thumb is a little too short. (However, it's not as eye-catching as thumbs that are too long, so this is a minor mistake)
- From the angle you drew, both of Aero's wings should've spread out. What I'm saying is that the right wing should spread out more to the right (like how the left wing is spread out to the left) (the right wing looks like it's folded). Spreading out both wings isn't that difficult, but making mistakes on spread wings is easy too. Careful.
- The right horn should be a little bit farther from the left horn. It kinda looks like as if it's sitting in the middle of Aero's head (unlike the right horn).
- (Not trying to sound weird or anything, but) Aero's right buttcheek is at a position that makes it too low. A very small lift (or re-positioning) could fix the mistake.
Praises:
+ I like how the yellow halo is transparent (and datglow). Nice effects.
+ The sketchy coloring was definitely a nice touch.
+ The way the hair is being lifted makes the drawing seem to be filled with light energy or some kind of... thing. I like it.
+ The eyes were uniquely colored. Heck, the eyes themselves were uniquely drawn.
+ The wings were overall drawn nicely and still look beautiful despite the mistakes I've seen.
To sum things up, you did great. The overall drawing and coloring style impressed me, and I certainly expect more to come from you. Keep at it.
-N7K-
Feedback:
- From the angle you drew, Aero's right wing is placed a little too high. Lowering the position would balance the wings.
- Left thumb is a little too short. (However, it's not as eye-catching as thumbs that are too long, so this is a minor mistake)
- From the angle you drew, both of Aero's wings should've spread out. What I'm saying is that the right wing should spread out more to the right (like how the left wing is spread out to the left) (the right wing looks like it's folded). Spreading out both wings isn't that difficult, but making mistakes on spread wings is easy too. Careful.
- The right horn should be a little bit farther from the left horn. It kinda looks like as if it's sitting in the middle of Aero's head (unlike the right horn).
- (Not trying to sound weird or anything, but) Aero's right buttcheek is at a position that makes it too low. A very small lift (or re-positioning) could fix the mistake.
Praises:
+ I like how the yellow halo is transparent (and datglow). Nice effects.
+ The sketchy coloring was definitely a nice touch.
+ The way the hair is being lifted makes the drawing seem to be filled with light energy or some kind of... thing. I like it.
+ The eyes were uniquely colored. Heck, the eyes themselves were uniquely drawn.
+ The wings were overall drawn nicely and still look beautiful despite the mistakes I've seen.
To sum things up, you did great. The overall drawing and coloring style impressed me, and I certainly expect more to come from you. Keep at it.
-N7K-
Wow Thank you so much for the well written critique! I completely understand where you're coming from thank you I'll keep it all in mind! Thanks for taking the time to write it. I can definitely see the mistakes. I'll still practice wings and overall anatomy. I'm glad to see someone actually knowing what they're talking about in their critiques.
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