This is the first draft of the chorus on a project I started last night.
I think it sounds a bit more agressive than my music usually does, but for some of you that know me and a few of those I tend to be around that wouldn't come as a shock...
I think it sounds a bit more agressive than my music usually does, but for some of you that know me and a few of those I tend to be around that wouldn't come as a shock...
Category Music / Trance
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 5.46 MB
I love the vocals. I think that the piano is a little too regulated though... You should vary the striking volume and randomize the pace of it a little bit. I think that if it were made just a little bit more uneasy, as if the keys were afraid to go forward, or the hand were struggling against unknown fear and weakness--ooh that would send chills up the spine of any listener. Just don't go overboard. Choosing a piano sample that's slightly out of tune was an AWESOME choice, though!
This song is a BIT TOO thump thump thump thump thump regular. It gets a tad monotonous. Some variation would help it a LOT o.o It gives the sort of feeling that we spend the whole time trying to get somewhere... but never do. Tiring, making you wonder "what's going to happen?" and when nothing does... well :\ I'll just say that you have a tremendous opportunity to BLOW THE MIND with this. You need to turn up that 'aggression' maybe 1/4th through and make it SHRED somehow. Some stirring counter-melody tones like some kind of scratchy, wavering string or woodwind would be creepy as HELL.
I hope this comment will be semi-useful to you o.o I completely understand if you'd rather not use this; they're only impressions.
This song is a BIT TOO thump thump thump thump thump regular. It gets a tad monotonous. Some variation would help it a LOT o.o It gives the sort of feeling that we spend the whole time trying to get somewhere... but never do. Tiring, making you wonder "what's going to happen?" and when nothing does... well :\ I'll just say that you have a tremendous opportunity to BLOW THE MIND with this. You need to turn up that 'aggression' maybe 1/4th through and make it SHRED somehow. Some stirring counter-melody tones like some kind of scratchy, wavering string or woodwind would be creepy as HELL.
I hope this comment will be semi-useful to you o.o I completely understand if you'd rather not use this; they're only impressions.
Well, it's the first draft, therefore not really all what it's supposed to be.. and any screaming-ish sounds that would fit in there could probably end up being there when I feel I'm done with the song, I just have to find something that fits in..
And the piano, it's actually two piano plug-ins on top of eachother, check back in a few days, maybe something have happened ;3
And the piano, it's actually two piano plug-ins on top of eachother, check back in a few days, maybe something have happened ;3
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