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Category All / Fantasy
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File Size 917.6 kB
Thanks for mentioning my little help on this one.
My brother and I were looking at it and... we came to a conclusion, which I'd like to write down right now. It's about your shading... specifically the body shadow on the ground!
The size of the shadow suggests that it is late afternoon/evening... but the background and sky makes it clear that it is morning/noon.
Kevin, such large shadows can only be seen when the sun is dawning!!
Furthermore... and it really pains me to say it now... but you knew this coming: I still like the pencil drawing/sketch more.
MUCH MORE!
Like I said, you kinda spoiled the very good sketch drawing witht he line art and colouring. You even added some NEW mistakes, such as the incorrect arms (biceps), the knee caps (why such wrinkles?) and shading.
From this light source, Hotara's right arm would ALSO be hit by light!!! His right biceps should show a small "spot of light".
It's a pity... the pencil drawing was really, REALLY good!
But that's the last time I comment on your line art/shading/colouring style.
I strongly suggest you get aquainted with your tablet... after all, you've always talked about your new tablet and now you don't use it. Which artist is using a MOUSE anymore? These lines look like drawn with MS-PAINT, sorry. -..-
It would be good for you to move on... to try new and different media.
Maybe doing a traditional artwork again!!!
My brother and I were looking at it and... we came to a conclusion, which I'd like to write down right now. It's about your shading... specifically the body shadow on the ground!
The size of the shadow suggests that it is late afternoon/evening... but the background and sky makes it clear that it is morning/noon.
Kevin, such large shadows can only be seen when the sun is dawning!!
Furthermore... and it really pains me to say it now... but you knew this coming: I still like the pencil drawing/sketch more.
MUCH MORE!
Like I said, you kinda spoiled the very good sketch drawing witht he line art and colouring. You even added some NEW mistakes, such as the incorrect arms (biceps), the knee caps (why such wrinkles?) and shading.
From this light source, Hotara's right arm would ALSO be hit by light!!! His right biceps should show a small "spot of light".
It's a pity... the pencil drawing was really, REALLY good!
But that's the last time I comment on your line art/shading/colouring style.
I strongly suggest you get aquainted with your tablet... after all, you've always talked about your new tablet and now you don't use it. Which artist is using a MOUSE anymore? These lines look like drawn with MS-PAINT, sorry. -..-
It would be good for you to move on... to try new and different media.
Maybe doing a traditional artwork again!!!
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