i dig the hair a lot :>

your line weight looks nice. you want to add some smaller defining lines though. see something like this http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8950385/ which has smaller lines to represent the seams in the jeans? you can do that with seams in the shoes too.

going back to the file a second time and adding more linework before you color really helps. i find that when i wait for the first time i line something, then zoom out to see the lines, i get a totally different experience.

or by flipping the picture horizontal.

what i guess i'm saying is that the more time you spend on it, the better it's gonna be. try spending about an hour on just the inking. see what happens! it's always exciting :>

Yeah, the finer lines sound like a good idea. I should work on that. But, as far as time goes, this took practically all night. XD
But, I understand and appreciate the tip. I need to work on drawing pants anyway. Thanks a ton! :D

i would reccomend for pants!

finding pictures and drawing them, on a time limit.

like 10 minutes to sketch AS MUCH AS YOU CAN of the folds and crinkles and things.

^ best advice my art teacher gave me

you do a bunch of them fast, getting as much detail in as a time

then you go and draw it with more detail

Interesting. I'll look into it. But for now I'm going to bed. =w=