Training wheels and training pants
foxfan1992 wrote me an adorable little story to cheer me up - read it here: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/...../#cid:28836932 And this is my continuation! Timothy and Friendly belong to
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Awww, that's a cute story, you're a really great writer.
Aww, you both seem like good friends... and wet ones too, oh well. Very cute that you guys ride bikes (I've been riding mine a lot lately... my legs are killing me from going up and down all those hills) I can see how cute that is.
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Yeah, that's what my bike and helmet look like. I've been using it for transportation a lot lately. Found this really cool Paintball store that I kept passing by but never noticed until now LOL And yeah I noticed they got their bikes stuck... (hehehe, wish it was their foot or tails but I can't complain)
Aww, would've been cute seeing Zee-Zee go behind a tree... unless Zee-Zee's never done that before. Anyway, great story, would love to see you write more... maybe about a certain black-furred echidna LOL
Aww, you both seem like good friends... and wet ones too, oh well. Very cute that you guys ride bikes (I've been riding mine a lot lately... my legs are killing me from going up and down all those hills) I can see how cute that is.
http://fav.me/d5ex9ej
Yeah, that's what my bike and helmet look like. I've been using it for transportation a lot lately. Found this really cool Paintball store that I kept passing by but never noticed until now LOL And yeah I noticed they got their bikes stuck... (hehehe, wish it was their foot or tails but I can't complain)
Aww, would've been cute seeing Zee-Zee go behind a tree... unless Zee-Zee's never done that before. Anyway, great story, would love to see you write more... maybe about a certain black-furred echidna LOL
Another brilliant work, Zee-Zee! It's an even funner read as, recently, my son just triumphed over training wheels to get himself officially on a two wheeler.
The other cool point you brought up is how difficult it is to peddle in wet grass. My son would whine when he got his bike in the grass and cry out for help. Now that he is a "2 wheeler" he puts his full, peddle power in and is super excited to see how far he can go before his little legs can carry him no more.
The favorite part of this story that I liked is how supportive the overall tale was. We had a Zee-Zee and his friends all contributing to the adventure as they were each in various stages of being able to use the potty. When the one had his accident, Zee and the other were so supportive and, later, when Zee had his whoopsie-doo the eldest in potty training power flipped the situation perfectly into stating how Zee-Zee sacrified his training pants by being a hero for his pal. What a way to be! Being able to take negatives and make positives that continue to reinforce important lessons, like potty training, are super important. Hurray for understanding and being mindful to the feelings ofothers.
<LoL!> Another funny relatable thing is how, as my son learned to ride without training wheels, he would always veer into the grass and get all frustrated as to why he kept falling. Having that in real life, coupled with reading it in this story, made the experience of listening to it super awesome.
And, guess what, I'm going to say it again in how you do an awesome job of capturing childhood. Man, how I hope you pursue your story writing more as I just can't get enough of these.
Do you have any other tales I've missed over the past 2+ months? If so, please do link me up. I would love to read them as, being off work healing gives me the perfect chance and this is a lot of fun!
The other cool point you brought up is how difficult it is to peddle in wet grass. My son would whine when he got his bike in the grass and cry out for help. Now that he is a "2 wheeler" he puts his full, peddle power in and is super excited to see how far he can go before his little legs can carry him no more.
The favorite part of this story that I liked is how supportive the overall tale was. We had a Zee-Zee and his friends all contributing to the adventure as they were each in various stages of being able to use the potty. When the one had his accident, Zee and the other were so supportive and, later, when Zee had his whoopsie-doo the eldest in potty training power flipped the situation perfectly into stating how Zee-Zee sacrified his training pants by being a hero for his pal. What a way to be! Being able to take negatives and make positives that continue to reinforce important lessons, like potty training, are super important. Hurray for understanding and being mindful to the feelings ofothers.
<LoL!> Another funny relatable thing is how, as my son learned to ride without training wheels, he would always veer into the grass and get all frustrated as to why he kept falling. Having that in real life, coupled with reading it in this story, made the experience of listening to it super awesome.
And, guess what, I'm going to say it again in how you do an awesome job of capturing childhood. Man, how I hope you pursue your story writing more as I just can't get enough of these.
Do you have any other tales I've missed over the past 2+ months? If so, please do link me up. I would love to read them as, being off work healing gives me the perfect chance and this is a lot of fun!
I'm sorry, that's all I've managed to produce in this last couple of months. But I'm so glad you like what I have written! I always love to see your comments! *hugs*
You could check out the guest-star of this story,
foxfan1992, who writes a lot of cute stories too! ^.^
You could check out the guest-star of this story,
foxfan1992, who writes a lot of cute stories too! ^.^
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