Ok, going to deal with this first. This is a vore story, so quite simply if you don't like vore, don't read it! (Simple, huh?). Now that thats out of the way, this is a request for Misterebony, who I respect much as another writer. Constructive critism is very welcome(This is the first time I ever wrote vore), and If you read it please comment and tell me what you think.
Oh, and one last thing, there is a bit of a story line to this, just be aware of that.