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was randomly doodling and i drew someone crying on stage...and these words came to mind, i know its not the greatest writing in the world :p but i was just writing what came to mind without really thinking about it...i kinda like it, but id like to know what the world thinks
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Hey ... it was good, I liked it !
I can't wipe the feeling that the guy in that poem is very selfish.
He maybe cares about all those people that he wants to make them happy. But he turns his back to the people that wants -him- to be happy, and care about -him-, just to look in the mirror and being satisfied with his own relfect.
The guy in the poem wants to make other people happy for his own peace and own happiness.
I think, the guy in the poem forgot where the heart is.
*read what he wrote* Hum ... I didn't mean to be harsh, is just the feeling I get from that poem.
<3
I can't wipe the feeling that the guy in that poem is very selfish.
He maybe cares about all those people that he wants to make them happy. But he turns his back to the people that wants -him- to be happy, and care about -him-, just to look in the mirror and being satisfied with his own relfect.
The guy in the poem wants to make other people happy for his own peace and own happiness.
I think, the guy in the poem forgot where the heart is.
*read what he wrote* Hum ... I didn't mean to be harsh, is just the feeling I get from that poem.
<3
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