Phew, finally a new chapter.
Sorry folks it took me so long, but well...as the proverb goes 'Things come to those who wait.' ^^
Hope you enjoy it.
Little Warning: Oh, and if any of you will write some harrassing stuff because of that last sentence...those comments will be deleted without mercy. Please just read the story and wait for the next chapter, there everything will be explained.
Thanks for your understanding.
Sorry folks it took me so long, but well...as the proverb goes 'Things come to those who wait.' ^^
Hope you enjoy it.
Little Warning: Oh, and if any of you will write some harrassing stuff because of that last sentence...those comments will be deleted without mercy. Please just read the story and wait for the next chapter, there everything will be explained.
Thanks for your understanding.
Category Story / General Furry Art
Species Alien (Other)
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It seems that you get confused with the names one time. You have written Matt instead of Thomas two times as I could see But don't worry about it. Such things can happen Anyway the story is well written again and I think it was interesting to read how the alines are reacting to the first contact with Thomas. But to be honest I had a problem to imagine the Sz'sirona right Because I know what kind of uniforms they are wearing I imagined them much more strict and military this time I'm sorry about this hun
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