A short trade with the illustrious Tavee http://www.furaffinity.net/user/tavee/ in return for this http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8842680/
He asked me to write a story centered around a fascinating character of his in the world of Lone Candle. I felt there was much interaction to be had with him and Liz, the barkeep.
I hope you like it bud!
He asked me to write a story centered around a fascinating character of his in the world of Lone Candle. I felt there was much interaction to be had with him and Liz, the barkeep.
I hope you like it bud!
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
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And yeah, a lot of people believe that a story and character-driven plot needs to be a romance wrought with sexual tension.
Nuts to that. There can exist a story about two characters of opposite sex that are not immediately and inexplicably attracted.
It sucks that so many don't understand that.
What Frank Herbert taught me was that something as simple as a room with people talking can hold more dramatic tension than the most explicit action sequence.
Neil Stephenson also knew this. In Snow Crash, he wrote about the hero, the protagonist (Whose name is, I jest thee not, Hiro Protagonist) who was involved in an altercation, then fled in his motorcycle. As Stephenson writes: 'After that, it's just a chase scene.' and that sentence alone is *far* more memorable than any chase scene written.
Nuts to that. There can exist a story about two characters of opposite sex that are not immediately and inexplicably attracted.
It sucks that so many don't understand that.
What Frank Herbert taught me was that something as simple as a room with people talking can hold more dramatic tension than the most explicit action sequence.
Neil Stephenson also knew this. In Snow Crash, he wrote about the hero, the protagonist (Whose name is, I jest thee not, Hiro Protagonist) who was involved in an altercation, then fled in his motorcycle. As Stephenson writes: 'After that, it's just a chase scene.' and that sentence alone is *far* more memorable than any chase scene written.
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