Part one: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8231662/
Let me first say, due to a NUMBER of issues that CONSTANTLY interfered with the writing of this, i feel that this chapter is more fragmented and not as well written as chapter 2, i hope to fix this come chapter 3.
As a word of warning, chapter 3 will contain much more diaper use, messing, wetting, and probbaly a lot more spanking and humilation before its over.
And critique is ALWAYS welcome!
Let me first say, due to a NUMBER of issues that CONSTANTLY interfered with the writing of this, i feel that this chapter is more fragmented and not as well written as chapter 2, i hope to fix this come chapter 3.
As a word of warning, chapter 3 will contain much more diaper use, messing, wetting, and probbaly a lot more spanking and humilation before its over.
And critique is ALWAYS welcome!
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honestly not sure if its ever going to get done at this point, fen and i had some issues between us, and he has made no effort on his part to work past them, and every conversation i try to have with him these days usualy ends beucase he has zero interest in chatting with me, so i have zero interest in doing anything for him :/
Ouch. Personal level, that's sad; arts level, it's also a pity because (as said) I do like this concept and where it was going.
Any chance you might work with another story along (vaguely) similar lines?
Part of me really wants to know what happened, to see if I could somehow sort it out, but it's clearly both a personal issue, and a bit of a forlorn hope anyway that I could sort it out if you can't. Have you tried seeing if someone who knew both of you could adjudicate, or act as a go between?
Any chance you might work with another story along (vaguely) similar lines?
Part of me really wants to know what happened, to see if I could somehow sort it out, but it's clearly both a personal issue, and a bit of a forlorn hope anyway that I could sort it out if you can't. Have you tried seeing if someone who knew both of you could adjudicate, or act as a go between?
i tried that with another issue i was having, and all i did in that case was ask the person "hey does this sound like its getting my point accross without being rude?" and they said yes, then things went south...
So... yeah... i wouldnt mind doing another story like this if someone wanted to comission one, i really did wanna finish it, but im not going to finish it if theres no real reason to at this point.
So... yeah... i wouldnt mind doing another story like this if someone wanted to comission one, i really did wanna finish it, but im not going to finish it if theres no real reason to at this point.
Well, I mean more asking someone who knows both of you to speak to him on your behalf, and see if that might help. If he's not listening to what you have to say, then it's going to be hard to get across that you want to / are willing to reconcile, and that you didn't mean to be rude... (different people have different standards of rudeness, of course...)
If it's someone else saying it, it might provide that level of separation that would help both parties to be more rational and less emotive about the whole thing.
If it's someone else saying it, it might provide that level of separation that would help both parties to be more rational and less emotive about the whole thing.
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