When I was in, I think, tenth grade english, we were told to write a sonnet in the same style as Shakespeare. It had to be in Iambic Pentameter, it had to have all five senses involved, and had to be about love and the like.
Needless to say it was hard to do. Most of the kids in my class didn't come close to correct. If I remember correctly, I was the only one who got it spot on.
So here it is, and it was written about my husband (I've been with him for eight years- '99. We married in 2004. I was 16 1/2, and he was 18. Now I'm 25 and he's 27).
A sonnet to my love
I knew your touch before we ever met
And often heard your voice calling to me.
Dreaming of you would leave my pillow wet
Destiny, it seemed, wanted us to be.
It has been said that fate will have its way
And one sweet day fate thankfully got it.
The taste of your lips on that summer day
Could not have been described by Shakespear's wit.
I look at us now, and we are complete
We share a love that will surpass all time.
Out story is one that no one can beat,
But can our love survive even death's chime?
Our love is the eternal fragrant rose,
The beauty of which no one but us knows.
Needless to say it was hard to do. Most of the kids in my class didn't come close to correct. If I remember correctly, I was the only one who got it spot on.
So here it is, and it was written about my husband (I've been with him for eight years- '99. We married in 2004. I was 16 1/2, and he was 18. Now I'm 25 and he's 27).
A sonnet to my love
I knew your touch before we ever met
And often heard your voice calling to me.
Dreaming of you would leave my pillow wet
Destiny, it seemed, wanted us to be.
It has been said that fate will have its way
And one sweet day fate thankfully got it.
The taste of your lips on that summer day
Could not have been described by Shakespear's wit.
I look at us now, and we are complete
We share a love that will surpass all time.
Out story is one that no one can beat,
But can our love survive even death's chime?
Our love is the eternal fragrant rose,
The beauty of which no one but us knows.
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Really, I've gone through about everything I've got. From middle school on! I don't write prolifically, but when I do, it means something and is usually pretty good. Some of the stuff I've posted, like this piece even, was only written because I had an assignment. Sometimes, even with my artwork, I get better results when I have to do it. When it's due and going to be a grade. I've popped out some of my best artwork while in a drawing class in college.
I'm glad to hear some are perusing my "hundred at one time" poetry posts.
I'm glad to hear some are perusing my "hundred at one time" poetry posts.
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