'start with the constructive stuff first;
-a few of the object-shapes in this aren't quite even; the lamp's right-side (from the viewer looking at it) & it's whole shadow (top, upper pole & the base), the glass closest to her (in comparison with the other), the size of her feet in correlation to her body (mostly on 'her' left foot).

-the little kink in the end of her tail looks a little to sever in angle to be natural (a softer curving would be less distracting), the (looking at it) right side of the lamp and some of the inner brick-work follows a slightly off curve (compared with the front)
-Think what could easily fix mosta those (and benefit to really 'show' her body-lines stronger) would be to increase the contrast or 'shadow line' around her thighs/arms, and certain 'edges' in the pic. (at the mo, some shapes bleed into each-other on her body a little)
The drape on her night-dress, whilst looking like a natural falling, doesn't appear the most flattering in shape on her tum~ (Probably only a slight 'see through' to her silhouette underneath would be a fixer on that though)

-There are some aspects that are SUPER-crisp in detail (with a WHOLE lotta attention to them!) and some focal points which are just that bit too soft to look finished. Her left feet toes are the most prominent (doesn't look as though she has separated enough toes) & logs look a mite under-detailed.

-And not a huge deal, but I woulda taken any immediately close smoke around the fire out. (smoke typically tends to form a bit above a fire, and where it is now, looks a little bit like an awkward shadow that fire shouldn't cast in places.)
*The fire itself looks real neat though~! mostly why it shouldn't be covered up~! :'D


Great Stuff~!
-The over-all tan-tining over the whole picture iz amazings. very nice jorb on keep all the colours 'within' it's range (makes the scene very comfortable)
-Shadow of the bottle on the wall was sucha neat idea~! *and though it could match the shape of the bottle o the table abit closer (the caster of the shadow look 'fatter' than the shadow) the shine trhough the liquid iz a real nice touch
-Super love her hair~! that came out real well, highlighting and shodowing~!
-I AM SIMPLY BLOWN AWAY by just how 'real' that shine on the glass from 'with in' the room is. :'0 i -literally- (ad a few times now) have the urge to move my head to correct 'light glare' on my screen, but it's just the way you've coloured it. PURRfect example of JUST the right amount of BG obscuring & colour on that~ (dang! 8'S)
-Bringing the wall closer to the foreground was a good move, it's set the lines a lot more solid. (and the slight sooting on the upper-half of the fireplace was attention to detail)
-Really liking the rug texture too :'3 good rumpling and through the toes~! ^^-; not to mention the overall lighting cast iz rather good.

I have stashed the other 3 pictures at their full size so you can grab them if you like.
I haven't added R&R as I do want to make a couple of those changes. She has a kink in her tail, that will be a part of her decription.

ah okay :'> so it was deliberate? (shoulda' let me know before inking the back-cover~!)

I did try and tell you they all had different fluff and stuff in their tails, but you inked it before I could make comment.

*and thanx! :'> (shall grab those and start implementing them into the final print-formatting)
-and iz SO WEIRD.........! 8'S I musta' dreamed that did already n showed me X'D lol

I don't think I have to add much to what Carnival said as for details...

What I LOVE most here is...

The tail ribbon
The lingerie
The frosted window
The overall look and feel
The fire

Oh, and that I am definitely getting that calendar... And I wonder if you open for commissions afterwards :)

sure will be! Once I am do with this I will put up my priceing