Don't say it, this is a big mash of some styles I like and I don't really think it has pulled off. But the nice bits of this tune are dedicated to
SilverFenrir because I think he has alot of awesome art with lots of nice bits xD
I don't claim to make sense, so for those with damaged ears, enjoy, for those with working ears.. here is a gun xD
[Snigger]
Criticisms are not required in this case, I'm aware of the flaws, just too tired and impatient to solve them!
Lurve Jed.
SilverFenrir because I think he has alot of awesome art with lots of nice bits xD I don't claim to make sense, so for those with damaged ears, enjoy, for those with working ears.. here is a gun xD
[Snigger]
Criticisms are not required in this case, I'm aware of the flaws, just too tired and impatient to solve them!
Lurve Jed.
Category Music / Other Music
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 89 x 120px
File Size 3.81 MB
Okay, I know you're not asking for a critique, but I think I might be able to help you. One of the things that makes the song sound strange is that you have that bell sound going on, it seems to have a lot of reverb. The result is a loud humm when you have it repeat quickly, so if you can get it not to echo for quite as long that should help. Also, you have a couple points where you have three melodies going on at the same time, it sounds like. If you want to do something like that, try cutting out the bass and the drums for a moment while the melodies do their thing, and bring back bass, then the drums, something like that. I dunno, I'm just rattling off ideas. It's your song, dude :)
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