Yay, you posted it here, too! ^^ It's funny you say you're not to proud of it. I thought it was just as good as anything you've written. My favourite part would probably be the newspaper theft. I should try that out sometime. ^^

Eh, it's probably because it seemed such a simple idea, yet took 12 pages to write it all out! (I'm way too used to writing those simple, short stories of TLK yore.) It was starting to feel way too much like this one four-lettered word called "Work." ;)

Heh heh, I love seeing what people find hilarious. Of all things, my favorite part is where Vitanni yells to Zira and Scar about how they were the worst parents ever. ;)

I almost expected Scar to yell back, "No, we're not! My parents were!", like on Father of the Pride. ;)