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This is my first attempt at the Thursday prompts that 
poetigress puts out every week.
Man, the action sequences here were REALLY hard to write. Oh please tell me that they're good. *makes puppy eyes* How does an acrobat actually go about battling a swordsman anyway?
This story represents one of only a few other attempts of mine at adding a very real element of sensuality to a piece. I'm barely practiced in that at all. I guess I'll wait and find out whether I hit it on the nose or if I failed miserably. :) lol I hope I did good on the whole lady's POV thing too.
In my effort to make Fletcher into the dashing hero type, I hope my descriptions of him as a bat didn't work against that goal. Bats aren't among the most handsome animals on the planet after all.
poetigress puts out every week. Man, the action sequences here were REALLY hard to write. Oh please tell me that they're good. *makes puppy eyes* How does an acrobat actually go about battling a swordsman anyway?
This story represents one of only a few other attempts of mine at adding a very real element of sensuality to a piece. I'm barely practiced in that at all. I guess I'll wait and find out whether I hit it on the nose or if I failed miserably. :) lol I hope I did good on the whole lady's POV thing too.
In my effort to make Fletcher into the dashing hero type, I hope my descriptions of him as a bat didn't work against that goal. Bats aren't among the most handsome animals on the planet after all.
Category Story / All
Species Bat
Size 103 x 120px
File Size 13.3 kB
Quite hilarious. Fletcher sounded a bit corny time to time, but the story was very entertaining in overall. Action, drama, little humor. The descriptions of the thugs were most imaginitive. And the twist in the end nearly made me fall my chair. Great short story, I enjoyed reading this very much.
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