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Renee Carter Hall's latest prompt, "an important question" gelled in my mind as this peek into the life of one of my new PCA characters. (In other words, this is Pokemon junk, move along.) Worth noting: I've changed Kaynen's last name to Abelson. So the pun is covered up, just a bit. Also, his sister is 5, incapable of speech, and a little slow. Also, I'm totally once again just making things up without rhyme or reason. Uh, I guess that's all from me.
EDIT: Reuploaded 1/06/08 to retcon Kay's species.
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Uhum, yeah. Gotta admit I’m in the probably 1% here that doesn’t know squat or care about pokemon, but I did get what you were trying to do here. I think the key was the dialog having enough information to convey what was going on. Earns a ‘Nice Job’ award from one of the clueless.
Oh boy... I was a bit scared as I glanced the commentary before reading and read the word "pokemon". But I made it through the story, even if the concepts and the character... species... are unfamiliar to me. Very interesting little piece, nothing much to say in addition to that.
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