Just some pretty swan-lass. Oh, and a potential heroine for my story.
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 550 x 860px
File Size 76.1 kB
As for my crit: (sorry bud)
I can see what you were trying to do with her pose. Coy, quiet and reserved; a strong femme.
...Problem is: Even with the angle...her body looks off.
Unless shes supposed to be uber muscular.
Neck & shoulders are far too wide, tho again, with the angle you are doing, makes it kinda tricky.
Other than that...like I said, your lines are clean and simple, and you do show her elegance quite clearly.
I can see what you were trying to do with her pose. Coy, quiet and reserved; a strong femme.
...Problem is: Even with the angle...her body looks off.
Unless shes supposed to be uber muscular.
Neck & shoulders are far too wide, tho again, with the angle you are doing, makes it kinda tricky.
Other than that...like I said, your lines are clean and simple, and you do show her elegance quite clearly.
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