A follow-up to this:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/853402/
I left out his pouch because I can't commit to drawing male roos with pouches, sorry.
Character is © Kelvin The Lion.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/853402/
I left out his pouch because I can't commit to drawing male roos with pouches, sorry.
Character is © Kelvin The Lion.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Fat Furs
Species Kangaroo
Size 806 x 837px
File Size 107.4 kB
Vary nice, I see you have gotten better. Good job!
Alright... Not that it's a problem or anything, but I think that big gut of his should sag a bit, showing how heavy he is. Also, the left ear looks a little odd to me for some reason. The shadow could be a bit bigger, remember that a shadow is like a outline of the body and should follow the bodies curves and shapes. A little more shading couldn't hurt ether.
Anyhow, you did a good job. Keep it going!
Alright... Not that it's a problem or anything, but I think that big gut of his should sag a bit, showing how heavy he is. Also, the left ear looks a little odd to me for some reason. The shadow could be a bit bigger, remember that a shadow is like a outline of the body and should follow the bodies curves and shapes. A little more shading couldn't hurt ether.
Anyhow, you did a good job. Keep it going!
Thanks! Good to know I'm improving. :)
I disagree about the sagging. I like it firm and round. There's no rule about how firm or saggy fat guts should be. But it comes down to a personal matter of taste. I like it just the right roundness, not too saggy.
Shadows and shading are relative to how much I polish a pic or don't. Here, it's more of a sketch than a finished piece. Had I been more involved, I would have shaded more.
Thanks for the feedback!
I disagree about the sagging. I like it firm and round. There's no rule about how firm or saggy fat guts should be. But it comes down to a personal matter of taste. I like it just the right roundness, not too saggy.
Shadows and shading are relative to how much I polish a pic or don't. Here, it's more of a sketch than a finished piece. Had I been more involved, I would have shaded more.
Thanks for the feedback!
Again, no problem at all.
Hmmm... That's true, I guess. I guess I got to be more open mined about that sort of thing. Oh well, a belly is a belly and that one is pretty lovable at that.
Ah, I see. Again, that is true. I guess shading is more of a doodle in itself then it is the drawing to me. I blame the art classes... =P
Welcome again! You might be hearing a lot more from me. :3
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