I say more rope and that knife looks odd.

Wow, very interesting colour. It changes the feel of the picture quite a bit. o.o

intresting situation.

intresting situation.

thansk ^^ the final painting will have waaay more muted colors and will go bak to having a more serious feel. but this rough helped out a lotwith visualizing what I do and dont want, I lliek how it turned out but its deffinetly not what i wnat for the final painting

Hmm, yes well there are some minor anatomy issues here. For a starter, that rabbit's arm is a little long and oddly jointed, and the bound wolf's right knee is also in need of adjustment.

Besides that, it's good. I like the intresting lighting.

its interesting how you use a highly saturated color that is based off a red in a shadowed area. i guess the suprising thing is that it works. i would recoment make the saturation in the blue shadowed area roughly equal to the saturation in the red violet area. in coloring this you lost alot ove the energy of the sketch and it would be nice to see that energy returned somehow. keep up the good work.

thanks for all the comments ^^ they will help a lot on teh final piece ^^ Ive decided to do this piece in water color, digital is just to foreign to me right now and I just dont know how to get teh color palet I want digitaly. im going to do a few more quick thumbnail color roughs tomorrow and see what kind of palet im going to use, might try one with a yellow ochre thrown to unify the colors and mute them way down, see how that pans out. as far as anatomy goes ive fixed some of teh problems mentioned ^^ id like to do a lot more as far as changing angles and such but unfortunetly for this assignment the final has to be based off of teh roughs and teh thumbnails so I cant go nuts completely redesigning,... drats ^^ ohh well it shoudl still be fun to work out in watercolors ^^

Other than the fact that it's like 3 times the width of my screen... seriously you need to size this sucker down. :D

hahaha yea its liek 3,000 x 2,000 of pure shittyness ^^; sorry bout that

love the colours ^_^

I'm highly anxious as to what happens to the guy in the chair!!!!! O.O I thought the colouring made this scene very dramatic.