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Done! Wow, I've had my ups and downs with this peice... But it's finally done, so enjoy!
commission for :DieEngel:
commission for :DieEngel:
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1191 x 929px
File Size 1.95 MB
Love it! The colours paint such a wonderful set, and I can't get over the texture of the Dress!
My only Critique lies in the male. His right hand specifically, as his thumb and fingers seem to be in a rather painfully awkward grip of the hilt. His stance also seems a bit flat in comparison to the lady's lovely dynamic rush,
but hey, what do I know? You're still over the top of I. :o)
Your art is definitely what makes it Worthwhile for me to Check FA. :]
My only Critique lies in the male. His right hand specifically, as his thumb and fingers seem to be in a rather painfully awkward grip of the hilt. His stance also seems a bit flat in comparison to the lady's lovely dynamic rush,
but hey, what do I know? You're still over the top of I. :o)
Your art is definitely what makes it Worthwhile for me to Check FA. :]
I guess I wanted to sword to be more of a second thought, so I didn't make it too fancy. I didn't however to make his grip on it unusual, but I think that was sort of a side effect of having the sword at that angle :( Unfortunately it's a little too late to change at this point.
And he's also supposed to be pulling her up onto the stone, so his pose is rigid and plain for a reason, as she is indeed the damsel in distress, swayed by the simple-dressed hero of humble beginnings. Although I think I could have given him a stronger stance by moving his left leg, I kind of like the way the negative space played when they both leaned towards one another.
Thanks for the criticism though, I don't get it enough, and it often helps me see flaws in my own art that I'm usually blind to.
And he's also supposed to be pulling her up onto the stone, so his pose is rigid and plain for a reason, as she is indeed the damsel in distress, swayed by the simple-dressed hero of humble beginnings. Although I think I could have given him a stronger stance by moving his left leg, I kind of like the way the negative space played when they both leaned towards one another.
Thanks for the criticism though, I don't get it enough, and it often helps me see flaws in my own art that I'm usually blind to.
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