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Sins of mankind (edited and fixed heavily)
100 watchers! this is my gift, the one that started it all, my first story...so i edited it, fixed it up a lot and made it 100% perfect!
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This is set 5 years after world war 3 the United Nations (United States, Great Britain and Russia) are all that's left as civilized nations. There need to create a new weapons to help keep them safe was approved by the UN 3 years after world war 3. A researcher, one from each country was sent to a secret base in Siberia that was used as a nuclear launch site (the nukes that are still there) they were given everything that they needed to make what they called a super human that is stronger, faster, and smarter but success comes with a price, a price that will test humanities worthiness to be the dominating species and there will to survive.
Chapter one: success
Day 752
We have discovered that by contaminating the DNA of a animal makes what we call a muscle mutation and it stimulates the muscles to grow at a very rapid rate giving them super strength and a increase in speed by 27% this is the largest spike in muscle acceleration in the past 2 years of work we are ecstatic and are preparing to display it to the united nations counsel today, wish me luck
Clayton Rovinski
"So you ready to display our great creation to the counsel"? Asked Dimitri who must have snuck up behind Clayton while he was finishing his daily log "God dimitri stop sneaking up on me while I'm writing you know how nervous I am so stop trying to make it worse" Clayton snapped at him "well my friend let's just sure this looks good, come on Ian is almost finished with setting up the transponder lets go get set up and grab the dog" he said jokingly. Clayton gave him a look that I use so often that he is used to it and sighed "ok dimitri give me a second ill go get it" Clayton said and started walking towards the door to the lab housed with 10 different animals each with a different species in each, what we found surprising is that the mutation we are trying only affects animals that use their brain more so the fish died after we tried it on the fish. Yet the 5 species that survived in the tests were a dog, wolf, a parakeet, a lizard, and hawk.5 died but we aren't sure if it was due to the living conditions or not.
Clayton walked over to the kennel with the dog in it, he was a white husky with a black spot covering half of its face, "come on buddy it's time to show off our first success in the past 2 years"
Clayton opened up the kennel and attached the leash to his collar and walked to the transponder station which is just a circular room with a camera in the middle and a screen on the far wall so we can chat both ways with the united nation council. "Hey Clayton over here" waved Ian,
Ian is a rather happy fellow who is always looking on the bright side of everything we joke around and say that as long as Ian can look to the bright side there is still hope that we will succeed. "Hey Ian you got the transponder set up yet"? Clayton asked "yea took all morning but I was able to direct it enough to get it though the damm snow storm its messing up the signal so I had some men set up a relay station 6 miles from here to redirect it to a satellite and then to the counsel" he replied in his cocky voice he uses to show that he still has a sense of humor in this barren wasteland. "Well whatever how long until we are scheduled to meet the counsel"? asked Clayton "oh about 20 to 30 minutes is my best guess they will contact us when they are ready" replied Ian, dimitri who was way to quiet for his usual self stepped in "hey we have enough time let pull out that aged whisky we`ve been saving for a day like this lets go pop it out and celebrate to a job well done" Clayton walked over to the computer next to the old TV camera they are forced to use "hold up guys we are getting contact from the council I'm putting us though now" Clayton pressed the receive button that began our transmission
"good day presidents" Clayton nodded at the camera" may we begin the presentation of you new super solder"? "Yes let us begin" said the United States president, president James.T.Harrison. "Ok as you know two years ago we were in need for a new weapon that could assist us in war well considering that we cannot continue forward with weapons we have though why not upgrade the person? I'll tell you this we, have engendered a cut in a DNA strand that causes a chain reaction making muscle growth increased and giving them more strength and are faster as well and increases brain stimuli making them up to 100% smarter" Clayton paused and pointed towards the husky, Randy as they began calling him that is our first successful experiment within days of the transfer we reported increase in his muscle growth and brain activity he is what we call the first super solder that this world has ever seen. Sadly though this one which we call X7 only works on animals we are still trying to fix that issue and make one that will work on humans" Clayton watched the screen waiting on their reply. The minister from great Brittan, minister Robbert.L.Harrisburg spoke up "so let us get this straight you have created a working prototype yet it only works on animals"? "Yes sir Clayton replied" we are working out the issues on it at the moment and it will be ready by the next month" Clayton replied in the calmest voice you can when addressing an angry leader.
dimitri spoke up "guys, we are making progress look at the dog it has a muscle increase of 27% that is the biggest increase of our entire research all we need to do is finish up and make the human prototype so don't start getting mad at us because we are trying our hardest" finishing his speech with his amped up voice that we've only heard on three occasions. Clayton was taken aback by how rudely he regarded the three most important men in the world "I'm sorry for my friends irrational behavior he is a little mad about how you are mad at us for all we have accomplished" Clayton said as dimitri stormed out of the room yelling one of his curses he so solemnly believed in. the Russian prime minister, Richard.R.Savker piped in "so if that is all we have to discuses today I guess we will sign off" and he pushed the button ending the transmission.
Clayton sighed "well that was one of the worse meetings we`ve had with them yet" he said and slumped down into his seat and looked over at randy and he seemed to have a look of sympathy on his face that must have startled me enough for Ian to notice "what's wrong Clayton"?
"Look at the dog!" Clayton said in a panicked voice "whoa is that normal for a dog to be able to do that?" "not sure Ian but I know he has never done before and it is really odd" Clayton said still look at Randy " well I think the stress is getting to us and we are starting to see thing" Ian chuckles " and remember that meeting wasn't that bad I mean remember when dimitri shot the screen because they got mad at him for wasting some time to fix the coolant vent" Clayton burst out laughing "yea yet they didn't care that it saved our life in the long run" Clayton sighed "well still the dog may be gaining more than what we anticipated" Clayton and Ian watched to dog as it continued to copy our facial features "something isn't right" they said in unison.
Chapter 2: lost hope
Day 764
Something is wrong with randy, he is getting bigger, stronger and he is able to copy most human expressions with a odd animal like addition to it we are getting concerned that the mutation is doing more than we expected it to and began locking all the X7 in a heavily armored vault to keep it from getting to the public and I pray that we can solve this for the sake of humanity its self we are keeping it save for god know what would happen if it was released to a wildlife area.
Day 765
Randy is getting odd he is able to manipulate practically every human expression and can sort of speak and manipulate his mouth to speak a small amount of English and we believe that the DNA manipulations did more than just make him stronger but it made him more human in form and is able to stand on his hind legs for hours on end, we will be putting him down tomorrow if this mutation doesn't stop. We care for Randy a lot but we all agreed it's for the better good.
Day 765.5
Randy escaped when I was getting the tissue samples analysis in the other room and Today we got word that some of the nukes that were left at the site were starting to activate, we are not sure how they were activated but my best guess is that they are just malfunctioning I sent Ian down to see if he can disable the missiles though we aren't sure if Randy`s IQ is high enough to program the missiles. We send Ian out 3 hours ago armed with a gun and his machete and haven't heard a word from him yet.
Clayton Rovinski
"Ian! Ian god dammit answers me" Clayton chucked the comms system at the floor "still no reply from him" said dimitri who was sitting behind Clayton with his rifle aimed at the door "yea" Clayton replied "I shouldn't have sent him out to try to disarm the missiles without any assistance" Clayton sighed. "What happened yesterday ,we were experimenting with him and went to go look at some tissue samples and then I heard the crash and panicked and ran back into the room to see a blur of white fly into the air ducts. I knew something was wrong with him and now what we`ve done may destroy the planet as we know it" Clayton said with a panicked tone in his voice. "As long as he can't get the supplement of X7 in this room then he can just blow up missiles and start a nuclear winter don't wor-" Clayton put his hand in front of his mouth "quiet I heard something "Clayton whispered, he pulled out his M9 and aimed it at the noise "crap I think he is in the ducts again" Clayton said in a panicked voice "yea I hear it " dimitri said as he pointed his rifle at the noise following it "you know what I think he doesn't know we are here" he said in a short victory whisper, Clayton whispered back "yea I think so wait…………listen……….I think he is coming………..ok I think he is go-" Clayton screamed as a blur of white and a claw comes down on dimitri neck tearing the skin and muscle out where Clayton could see the bone. His face turned as white as the snow outside the base and fell as fast as a rock. "DIMITRI NOOOOOO" Clayton screamed as Randy came up to him with the rifle and the last thing he saw was the butt of a rifle hitting him in the face and the world going black.
3 hours later
Clayton blinked slowly every movement hurt, he took a mental reading of how he felt. At least one broken rib a small concision and a puncture to the head, he could feel the blood running down his head as he got up and was dazed and not sure what happened then the pang of terror as dimitri was killed and Ian was believed to be lost "oh my god this is awful" he got up and looked around and wasn't that surprised to see that a large amount of the X7 was missing "well it looks like my guess on what he would try to do was correct" he walked out of the vault and started to the control room were ever he looked nothing had seemed to change for a moment he thought just going to a regular meeting, and savored the moment. he walked into the control room and went to check the partially functioning control panel and saw that one of the usual he moment. I walked into the control room and went to check the partially functioning control panel and one of the usual blank screens was in glowing red buttons 0:23 he was taken aback how in the world was it able to program the launch sequence it would have taken a really smart person to program it correctly a few days "god the stimulant is giving them more intelligence than I thought it would" he looked back at the timer 0:03 "good lord this is the end" 0:2 "how will we survive this?" 0:1 "this will challenge the human race more than anything" 0:0 and the screen turned green LAUNCHING. Then the rumbling of the rockets launching came a voice from the doorway "so is this what you planned for us to just let us die off after what you've done to us. The reason I am here is because of this stupid idea of self preservation" he turned around and he gave me a stare that would freeze a volcano, oh my god he is wearing Ian's cloths Clayton thought and looked he has three long claw marks down the shirt and by the red stains around the marks he cut deep and had a gun in his back pocket "today is the start of your races ending my brothers are almost complete with our transformation and there is nothing your people can do to stop it" he pulled a pistol out of his back pocket and aimed it at me. he prayed to every god for forgiveness for what he had done then heard a bang a loud thump then silently spiraled into darkness.
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This is set 5 years after world war 3 the United Nations (United States, Great Britain and Russia) are all that's left as civilized nations. There need to create a new weapons to help keep them safe was approved by the UN 3 years after world war 3. A researcher, one from each country was sent to a secret base in Siberia that was used as a nuclear launch site (the nukes that are still there) they were given everything that they needed to make what they called a super human that is stronger, faster, and smarter but success comes with a price, a price that will test humanities worthiness to be the dominating species and there will to survive.
Chapter one: success
Day 752
We have discovered that by contaminating the DNA of a animal makes what we call a muscle mutation and it stimulates the muscles to grow at a very rapid rate giving them super strength and a increase in speed by 27% this is the largest spike in muscle acceleration in the past 2 years of work we are ecstatic and are preparing to display it to the united nations counsel today, wish me luck
Clayton Rovinski
"So you ready to display our great creation to the counsel"? Asked Dimitri who must have snuck up behind Clayton while he was finishing his daily log "God dimitri stop sneaking up on me while I'm writing you know how nervous I am so stop trying to make it worse" Clayton snapped at him "well my friend let's just sure this looks good, come on Ian is almost finished with setting up the transponder lets go get set up and grab the dog" he said jokingly. Clayton gave him a look that I use so often that he is used to it and sighed "ok dimitri give me a second ill go get it" Clayton said and started walking towards the door to the lab housed with 10 different animals each with a different species in each, what we found surprising is that the mutation we are trying only affects animals that use their brain more so the fish died after we tried it on the fish. Yet the 5 species that survived in the tests were a dog, wolf, a parakeet, a lizard, and hawk.5 died but we aren't sure if it was due to the living conditions or not.
Clayton walked over to the kennel with the dog in it, he was a white husky with a black spot covering half of its face, "come on buddy it's time to show off our first success in the past 2 years"
Clayton opened up the kennel and attached the leash to his collar and walked to the transponder station which is just a circular room with a camera in the middle and a screen on the far wall so we can chat both ways with the united nation council. "Hey Clayton over here" waved Ian,
Ian is a rather happy fellow who is always looking on the bright side of everything we joke around and say that as long as Ian can look to the bright side there is still hope that we will succeed. "Hey Ian you got the transponder set up yet"? Clayton asked "yea took all morning but I was able to direct it enough to get it though the damm snow storm its messing up the signal so I had some men set up a relay station 6 miles from here to redirect it to a satellite and then to the counsel" he replied in his cocky voice he uses to show that he still has a sense of humor in this barren wasteland. "Well whatever how long until we are scheduled to meet the counsel"? asked Clayton "oh about 20 to 30 minutes is my best guess they will contact us when they are ready" replied Ian, dimitri who was way to quiet for his usual self stepped in "hey we have enough time let pull out that aged whisky we`ve been saving for a day like this lets go pop it out and celebrate to a job well done" Clayton walked over to the computer next to the old TV camera they are forced to use "hold up guys we are getting contact from the council I'm putting us though now" Clayton pressed the receive button that began our transmission
"good day presidents" Clayton nodded at the camera" may we begin the presentation of you new super solder"? "Yes let us begin" said the United States president, president James.T.Harrison. "Ok as you know two years ago we were in need for a new weapon that could assist us in war well considering that we cannot continue forward with weapons we have though why not upgrade the person? I'll tell you this we, have engendered a cut in a DNA strand that causes a chain reaction making muscle growth increased and giving them more strength and are faster as well and increases brain stimuli making them up to 100% smarter" Clayton paused and pointed towards the husky, Randy as they began calling him that is our first successful experiment within days of the transfer we reported increase in his muscle growth and brain activity he is what we call the first super solder that this world has ever seen. Sadly though this one which we call X7 only works on animals we are still trying to fix that issue and make one that will work on humans" Clayton watched the screen waiting on their reply. The minister from great Brittan, minister Robbert.L.Harrisburg spoke up "so let us get this straight you have created a working prototype yet it only works on animals"? "Yes sir Clayton replied" we are working out the issues on it at the moment and it will be ready by the next month" Clayton replied in the calmest voice you can when addressing an angry leader.
dimitri spoke up "guys, we are making progress look at the dog it has a muscle increase of 27% that is the biggest increase of our entire research all we need to do is finish up and make the human prototype so don't start getting mad at us because we are trying our hardest" finishing his speech with his amped up voice that we've only heard on three occasions. Clayton was taken aback by how rudely he regarded the three most important men in the world "I'm sorry for my friends irrational behavior he is a little mad about how you are mad at us for all we have accomplished" Clayton said as dimitri stormed out of the room yelling one of his curses he so solemnly believed in. the Russian prime minister, Richard.R.Savker piped in "so if that is all we have to discuses today I guess we will sign off" and he pushed the button ending the transmission.
Clayton sighed "well that was one of the worse meetings we`ve had with them yet" he said and slumped down into his seat and looked over at randy and he seemed to have a look of sympathy on his face that must have startled me enough for Ian to notice "what's wrong Clayton"?
"Look at the dog!" Clayton said in a panicked voice "whoa is that normal for a dog to be able to do that?" "not sure Ian but I know he has never done before and it is really odd" Clayton said still look at Randy " well I think the stress is getting to us and we are starting to see thing" Ian chuckles " and remember that meeting wasn't that bad I mean remember when dimitri shot the screen because they got mad at him for wasting some time to fix the coolant vent" Clayton burst out laughing "yea yet they didn't care that it saved our life in the long run" Clayton sighed "well still the dog may be gaining more than what we anticipated" Clayton and Ian watched to dog as it continued to copy our facial features "something isn't right" they said in unison.
Chapter 2: lost hope
Day 764
Something is wrong with randy, he is getting bigger, stronger and he is able to copy most human expressions with a odd animal like addition to it we are getting concerned that the mutation is doing more than we expected it to and began locking all the X7 in a heavily armored vault to keep it from getting to the public and I pray that we can solve this for the sake of humanity its self we are keeping it save for god know what would happen if it was released to a wildlife area.
Day 765
Randy is getting odd he is able to manipulate practically every human expression and can sort of speak and manipulate his mouth to speak a small amount of English and we believe that the DNA manipulations did more than just make him stronger but it made him more human in form and is able to stand on his hind legs for hours on end, we will be putting him down tomorrow if this mutation doesn't stop. We care for Randy a lot but we all agreed it's for the better good.
Day 765.5
Randy escaped when I was getting the tissue samples analysis in the other room and Today we got word that some of the nukes that were left at the site were starting to activate, we are not sure how they were activated but my best guess is that they are just malfunctioning I sent Ian down to see if he can disable the missiles though we aren't sure if Randy`s IQ is high enough to program the missiles. We send Ian out 3 hours ago armed with a gun and his machete and haven't heard a word from him yet.
Clayton Rovinski
"Ian! Ian god dammit answers me" Clayton chucked the comms system at the floor "still no reply from him" said dimitri who was sitting behind Clayton with his rifle aimed at the door "yea" Clayton replied "I shouldn't have sent him out to try to disarm the missiles without any assistance" Clayton sighed. "What happened yesterday ,we were experimenting with him and went to go look at some tissue samples and then I heard the crash and panicked and ran back into the room to see a blur of white fly into the air ducts. I knew something was wrong with him and now what we`ve done may destroy the planet as we know it" Clayton said with a panicked tone in his voice. "As long as he can't get the supplement of X7 in this room then he can just blow up missiles and start a nuclear winter don't wor-" Clayton put his hand in front of his mouth "quiet I heard something "Clayton whispered, he pulled out his M9 and aimed it at the noise "crap I think he is in the ducts again" Clayton said in a panicked voice "yea I hear it " dimitri said as he pointed his rifle at the noise following it "you know what I think he doesn't know we are here" he said in a short victory whisper, Clayton whispered back "yea I think so wait…………listen……….I think he is coming………..ok I think he is go-" Clayton screamed as a blur of white and a claw comes down on dimitri neck tearing the skin and muscle out where Clayton could see the bone. His face turned as white as the snow outside the base and fell as fast as a rock. "DIMITRI NOOOOOO" Clayton screamed as Randy came up to him with the rifle and the last thing he saw was the butt of a rifle hitting him in the face and the world going black.
3 hours later
Clayton blinked slowly every movement hurt, he took a mental reading of how he felt. At least one broken rib a small concision and a puncture to the head, he could feel the blood running down his head as he got up and was dazed and not sure what happened then the pang of terror as dimitri was killed and Ian was believed to be lost "oh my god this is awful" he got up and looked around and wasn't that surprised to see that a large amount of the X7 was missing "well it looks like my guess on what he would try to do was correct" he walked out of the vault and started to the control room were ever he looked nothing had seemed to change for a moment he thought just going to a regular meeting, and savored the moment. he walked into the control room and went to check the partially functioning control panel and saw that one of the usual he moment. I walked into the control room and went to check the partially functioning control panel and one of the usual blank screens was in glowing red buttons 0:23 he was taken aback how in the world was it able to program the launch sequence it would have taken a really smart person to program it correctly a few days "god the stimulant is giving them more intelligence than I thought it would" he looked back at the timer 0:03 "good lord this is the end" 0:2 "how will we survive this?" 0:1 "this will challenge the human race more than anything" 0:0 and the screen turned green LAUNCHING. Then the rumbling of the rockets launching came a voice from the doorway "so is this what you planned for us to just let us die off after what you've done to us. The reason I am here is because of this stupid idea of self preservation" he turned around and he gave me a stare that would freeze a volcano, oh my god he is wearing Ian's cloths Clayton thought and looked he has three long claw marks down the shirt and by the red stains around the marks he cut deep and had a gun in his back pocket "today is the start of your races ending my brothers are almost complete with our transformation and there is nothing your people can do to stop it" he pulled a pistol out of his back pocket and aimed it at me. he prayed to every god for forgiveness for what he had done then heard a bang a loud thump then silently spiraled into darkness.
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