once again awesome writing
reminds me of 'the fifth stone' by micha pansi. interesting story, one of the few good books i found out there. well the first part does. the second one is more like ... i've never seen something like that, it's still awesome :)
you did a good job confusing me without getting me lost
that language, how did you make that up? did you think of actual grammar or did you just use some sort of algorithm to transform some language into this?
keep this up, want to keep reading :)

Some of it was just English i'd made up a new word for, other bits were just used once so i made something up, lol.

Glad you liked it! Maybe i'll continue it later. :) I just updated it a bit now, but nothing serious. Fixed a few wording errors.