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And here's the final writing prompt given in the journal. This one was supplied by 
CalextheNeko who wanted me to write a transformation story about a kitsune trying to earn its next tail.
Sorry this one took a while to get out but I hope it was worth it
CalextheNeko who wanted me to write a transformation story about a kitsune trying to earn its next tail. Sorry this one took a while to get out but I hope it was worth it
Category Story / Transformation
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Size 50 x 50px
File Size 21.3 kB
Very nice work! Your flow was splendid and you used a well varied set of sentence structures and word choice. I didn't notice any misspellings or improper shifts in tense. The only thing I would watch out for in the future is to be sure that you stick to a single format for your numbers, shifting between numerals and spelling them out distracts the reader. Once again though, this was a truly excellent piece.
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