The second part of my MLP:FiM fic.
Scootaloo is in the hospital with Rainbow Dash watching over her, while her friends begin to set their plans into motion with some unlikely help. This takes place the day after Broken Scooters - Accidents. If you haven't read it yet, please do so. I'll wait.
It's here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8181851/
Your back? Good. On with the story.
Scootaloo is in the hospital with Rainbow Dash watching over her, while her friends begin to set their plans into motion with some unlikely help. This takes place the day after Broken Scooters - Accidents. If you haven't read it yet, please do so. I'll wait.
It's here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8181851/
Your back? Good. On with the story.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 109 x 120px
File Size 72.4 kB
*Spoiler Alert* *Spoiler Alert*
To be honest when I read your fisrt story, this is not how I saw it playing out. When I saw the name of this chapter I could tell where it was heading. Unfortunely, I am not a huge fan of tragedy, but I wish you the best of luck in writing to those who who are.
To be honest when I read your fisrt story, this is not how I saw it playing out. When I saw the name of this chapter I could tell where it was heading. Unfortunely, I am not a huge fan of tragedy, but I wish you the best of luck in writing to those who who are.
You're right, I should not jump to conclusions so quickly. I know there are writters out there who write tragedy and I may have mistaken you for one of those. I was a little emotionally shaken when I wrote that. Like you said the story isn't over yet and I should withold judgement until the end.
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