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Category Flash / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 550 x 400px
File Size 227.3 kB
nice! few crits
1: mouth looks GREAT you grasped that awesome/
2: eyes are blinking too regularly. add more space between some and push some closer together. its too uniform.
3: arms seem like they're moving a bit too much, try some more subtly movement, let some frames hold out so that the movements stand out more rather than looking liek flaily noodles. :)
1: mouth looks GREAT you grasped that awesome/
2: eyes are blinking too regularly. add more space between some and push some closer together. its too uniform.
3: arms seem like they're moving a bit too much, try some more subtly movement, let some frames hold out so that the movements stand out more rather than looking liek flaily noodles. :)
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