wow this is so cute and I love it alot. *hugs*

This is rather a touching piece.

I'm not real familiar with the character, so I'm guessing the Mark she is speaking of isn't a tv character, but a real person.

While her wanting to make things right could be seen as an offer for sex, I find it much better to think of it in more wholesome terms.

So, am I correct on any of these things?

If not, I still like the idea of this being a touching piece void of perversion.

It actually is void of perversion, of any kind. Mark is the person she's talking to; the person she's wronged. It's based off of a story I'm writing (slowly) that features these events. Mark plays with Bright Heart as a kid, and one day they're supposed to have a final playdate. Well, BH forgets and Mark begins to wonder if she ever existed at all. This is the beginning of a dark spiral in his life where he doesn't believe in true hope or happiness. He gets a dead-end job and joins a heavy metal band that helps him vent his feelings, but something always bothers him. Eventually, Brightheart learns of her mistake and tries to correct it, and it's her first time trying to deal with an adult.

That's the basic premise of the story.

that is some really heavy stuff -.- I would like to read the story when it is done :)

I'd love to read that story when its finished.

She must not realize the one she is asking is Mark.

I hope this story ends well.

I think she does and that's the whole point. She's using that as an approach

I hope everything turns out okay.

I'll be interested to see the finished piece, if you decide to post it.

and then they have sex! *dodges thrown bottle*

Seriously, where do you keep coming up with these great ideas for stories. :)

I think I've said it before, Bright Heart always was my favorite, I used to have a plushie LONG ago :3

It's sort of eerie, how well you do expressions. Definitely interested in the story.

To be fair, I give myself a big canvas to work with. Things become much more easily possible. But thank you on both accounts; I will try hard to get it down. :)

You know...now I have to wonder how this is gonna influence the guy's band.

Ah, nostalgia. It makes for interesting moments. And purple!

Er. Hmm. Not really nostalgia if you don't actually believe what happened back then did happen. Hmm. Can't think of any specific word that'd cover such.

Very soft, and not in the way we usually use that term. The background is a pleasant surprise, too.

awww *hugs*

Maybe not as much as forgotten as it were being called away to do something else and being unable to go to the playdate.

aw... uvu It's... very nice.

...wow...

Great piece, Nori. And with that open, roundabout, completely sincere apology...

...how could you not feel for them?

Niiiiiice description. You definately caught my curiosity.

Her face is prefect. And hearing the story behind... it's incredibly sweet. I'm looking forward to reading it.

You're making me want to sketch a CB Mycroft again. >_<

I would love to read a story like this. Lemme know if you want a sounding board for ideas (being a fledgling writer myself).

I gotta say, tho. You have options based on this pic. Brightheart is wonderfully laid out here and if I were in Mark's shoes, I really don't know what I would think, now that I am an adult. Kids see things differently than we do and given the synopsis, seems like he'd have maybe a few problems in dealing with her.

Just a few thoughts there, sorry. Anyways, hope the story comes out well and I can't wait to read it!

Awww, that's cute...

On a related note, have you seen Mune's Care Beasts yet?

No, I have not!

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/825179/

He's the first one he's drawn!

This is full of emotion, with BrightHeart's expression and the deep clear starry sky. It feels like a desolate place, but right at this moment it's just peaceful.
I want to read this story. I hope you'll post it once it's finished.

Oh, definitely. If I didn't, at this point, I'd just be a jerk. Everyone wants to read it, evidently, and it's really encouraging to me. =)

Sounds like a good story.

Best. Disappointment. Ever.